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"Dirty Looks & Adrenaline" by maddin foxxxy

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I'll be hiding
inside your dirty look ..
take me from there
to where you want me
to go
and drift
into liberation

Poison yourself
in my veins

I want to feel your
drug on me
breakin' through my system
and makin' each inch
your home

My place is your home ..


Torn as it may seem
The drapes are on
the floor
the water's drowning
whole
and floating by there are
all the faces
I have worn

But now I've seen it
through
Inside the savage
in your eyes
is where I want to
lie

To wear another kind of face
and change into some
other kind of grace
the face
with the smile

this night
will be wild

this night
is on fire

I'll be drinkin'
for the sake of us
I'll be hidin'
inside your
dirty look

let's take it
from there
 
I'm an open book
..




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On Tuesday August 14th, 2007, Reefer_rave (229) writes:
now I need to smoke a cigarette this was so good


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Stranger (281) writes:
Utterly fantastic. This has deep reaching tentacles that left their mark in the remotest parts of my being.


On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
'Poison yourself in my veins' deep/dark/edged...poetry to drink of flesh for intoxification...


On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
It feels so natural Maddin. Your creativity is endless, and your words are inspirational. I love the ending. Actually, I love the entire piece!


On Monday March 15th, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (343) writes:
"Torn as it may seem The drapes are on the floor the water's drowning whole and floating by there are all the faces I have worn" this stanza hit me deeply...for no matter what face you have on, in your poetry you will always be beautiful...-l-


On Monday March 15th, 2004, OLd SouL (838) writes:
'and floating by there are all the faces I have worn' I love that line.. as well as others in this poem. I like the feeling the conclusion has. Inviting and intriguing. :::OLd


On Monday March 15th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:
I saw the title and had a feeling it might be one of yours...great words as always. I always feel right 'there' as I read them. Fox


On Monday March 15th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:
Truly amazing. My favourite "verse" if you want to call it that was "I want to feel your drug on me breakin' through my system and makin' each inch your home " I loved the whole thing. It was gorgeous---Alyssa



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