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Right now
in between my own arms
it's my own warmth ..

Blind me now
form non-sense
I will not dare see
I will not give
in

To the darkness now
Every feeling
is a shadow
undiscovered
and recovered
form craShING IN
with me now ..

Is God with me now?
Could I feel God
somehow?

Losing in the knives
of the minutes
that went through ..
I've gone through
into cold
and waste ..

And is Your power
one that pastes?

Now..

Breathe out ..
To breathe in ...

Are You with me now?
Do You breathe somehow?

And to only
have some sympathy
for the ones
that bleed ..

I am one
that needs...

[now] ..

I carry the skies
and too many voices
whispering goodbyes ..
and faults and things
that fly
from me
away ..

'Nothing in here stays'
Yesterday I heard say..

Best to take it
as it comes

And release it
when it harms

Best to breathe it
while it warms

In between my own arms ..



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On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
I have to agree with Old Soul. The beginning and ending felt very natural and comforting. The "I carry the skies" stanza definately held a lot of weight (no pun intended).


On Tuesday March 9th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
I felt a bit of distress in your words, but this somehow left a very calming affect on me.


On Monday March 1st, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (364) writes:
so many sentiments you have shared here....very sweet and honest piece...and certainly the 'i hold the skies' stanza is brilliant...wonderful as always...-l-


On Monday March 1st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
'Between Arms' / 'Every feeling is a shadow undiscovered and recovered form craShING IN with me now ' entre nous... beautiful, this poem; the feelings... breathing soulful passions...


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Evil (544) writes:
outstanding. this is...it just flows like liquid..it makes me want to go outside and just stare into the starry skies. thanks


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:
heartrending and beautiful. I especially love the "I carry the skies" stanza too: truly wonderfully expressed. purr


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, flying_fox (766) writes:
wow...your writing is exquisite. Wonderful phrasing. I agree with OLd...'I carry the skies' is beautiful. FF


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:
Beautiful and intimate, I especially loved the opening lines. So sad and it captures you. Awesome write. ~L


On Sunday February 29th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:
:) my fav part was the verse starting with, 'I carry the skies'. The ending was spectacular. This poem embraced me. You are amazing. :::OLd



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