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Nudity of Expression

Naked ... I stand...
..I shake before what surrounds me
in between the movements of now..
I will not edit
my words
But I will breathe in
more than I need to...

Exposed from the
residues of truth
from the past..
I wonder how long
has it been
since all of time
have last..

I have a killer inside
that wants the death of me
I have a lover inside
that wants more love from me
I have a sinner inside
that wants more dirt to feed

And they're all a part
of me
And they all fight
to let be

These thoughts
they've rambled
on the sight
of your eyes...
and if they saw me
I want to know it all
and if I've stand naked here
I want to do it all..

I make no sense
when I write
and I have no clear
view for my sight
So I'll always be
this real
and I will always
feed in more to
what I need to feel..

I have this stranger inside
I've always want to meet
I have these nightmares inside
I want to put to sleep
I have this hunger inside
that wants to eat from me

so why
to die from it?
so why
to live from it?
so why
be something of it all
and why
be anything at all? ...

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On Thursday February 26th, 2004, Drea (934) writes:

you have such away with emotions. you mold the words to convey what you want. ...and you do it amazingly well. I have always been in awe of your talent. This work is like a whisper...~Drea~

On Monday February 9th, 2004, cre (508) writes:

This is a really fantastic write . . such an incredible way to express what is inside . . in an honest and touching way, that whispers to the very core in all of us. Wonderful job.

On Monday February 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

beautiful in its quaundry...... this work is well in its truth, but you have always portrayed that well in your work....there are many within the one.....well done my friend...........urban

On Friday February 6th, 2004, Stranger (281) writes:

This is one of the better poems that I have seen in a while; on DP or anywhere else. It is stark in its honest introspection and gentle in its verdict. It is heartfelt while being thought provoking. It is amazing and beautiful.

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, shadowsinthelight (211) writes:

What a great read. You delve deeply and honestly into yourself and then share what you find with us. Thank you. S

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, shadowsinthelight (211) writes:

en cuanto a su cuadro, usted es una mujer hermosa. ;)

On Thursday February 5th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

*deeply blushed*...thanks

On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

This is absolutely sensational. I picked the same line as Purr, and read this with understanding and awe. Brilliant work. FF

On Sunday February 1st, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

sshhh.. I'm still trying to picture you naked. Seriously, it was as if you inhaled the world and then with one breath, painted a mural on the sky of what you percieve. *muah* wonderful :::OLd

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (349) writes:

amazing flow and a superb sense of passion portrayed here...breathtaking to say the least....-l-

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

beautiful work, and "I will not edit my words / But I will breathe in more than I need to..." is just marvellous...you've captured this sensation perfectly. purr

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

"I have this stranger inside I've always want to meet" Wow... I've felt like that before... This poem is such an interesting concept. Well done, it's great. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (194) writes:

Outstanding poetry, i was at the edge of my seat reading slow to capture the very essence of this poem, it is wonderful, i will have to read more of your work if the rest is anything like this masterpiece, good job, ~Emptyness~

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