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Pretentious Affair

Had abandoned myself
to perish
inside the moments
that carried
the desires
not granted.
Every step I had encouraged
was a step back
from what I really
wanted.
And did you fit in
the movie
I made for us?
Did you kiss
when you meant to?
Did you love
when you least expected to?
I lived through the standards
of the road
of an every-day routine.
Everything at first
fills in a
pleasure-like steam.
Did you like me
when you said you did?
Were you satisfied
from your special needs?
I can only detach
from everything I know...
And change into
some other kind of skin....
I do kiss
when I mean to...
I do love
when I least expect to...
Had fun in pasting
the pieces of me....
and are you as happy
as you're pretending to be?

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On Friday November 19th, 2004, darkleprechaun (69) writes:

mmm... very tastey. i enjoyed this much... and will be reading more.

On Saturday November 8th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

Ok... You need to tell me how to tap your creativity and wordplay. It definately can be hard to tell the difference between the sincere and the pretenders. It looks like that would leave us with a hopeful thought.

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, wilted (297) writes:

"I can only detach from everything I know... And change into some other kind of skin.... " good line. overall, great poem. -kirstyn

On Saturday November 1st, 2003, Bloody_Hands (29) writes:

I think we all see a bit of ourselves in this piece, amazing work you have here. ~Lynne

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (712) writes:

reminds me of my life.

On Wednesday October 29th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

"And did you fit in the movie I made for us?" Great line! I really enjoyed reading this poem, S. Even though I do not like the hurt you mustve felt but its not yur pieces pasted its the fools pretentious lies who thought he was pasting yu whos in pieces

On Tuesday October 28th, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:

the lines in this stir memories of a poem i wrote a while back a poem no one has ever seen, beautiful job

On Saturday October 25th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:

" Did you kiss when you meant to? Did you love when you least expected to?" I know this feeling, this questioning, I like this..a lot

On Thursday October 23rd, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

wondering if those feelings are genuine or is he just playing "the role". great write as usual maddin. you always have a charming way of describing an emotion

On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, Seraphic (290) writes:

"And did you fit in the movie I made for us?" Search for perfection and you will find nothing. Very nice, I liked this very much *~seraph~*

On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:

I sit and stare at this and wonder, I see so much of me in this very nice.............O.

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