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"Good for You Solely" by maddin foxxxy

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You told somebody
that now life
could breath
side by side
with you.

And that when
you kiss her,
you can tell
you love her
when you really do.

I said that
it was good
the way you
don't need to
talk to me anymore.

And that you left
the past with me
because we had become
in better company
forevermore.

You said now
it was "quiet",
perhaps you meant
"peaceful"--
who knows?

And how it is that
still I hear that
music....
that strangely comes
and goes.

I said it was good
that you had
managed to find a way
to place fire
to all those letters.

And when you did,
(though I didn't know),
I swear I felt
I could perhaps find (like you)
a way to make life better.

The years go too fast,
and too slow to catch on,
I have learnt
a way for me
to embrace cold.

Wrapped in my world,
lonely, but free,
dancing to sounds
of piano rushes
(as only things to hold).

And you said it was good
to be so far away
and to touch
life...
now in different ways.

I said it was good
to live life
as every second plays...
Good for you solely,
-- I still skip the days --








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On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
My modest comments can do nothing to justify the intricate beauty portrayed in this piece. I felt very connected to your words and emotion. Almost as though it were my song. Beautiful.


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Crystal Passion (257) writes:
oh my goodness the razor edge of your words cut right through me... i can truly relate... ~tear~ -kRYz


On Tuesday September 30th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:
Wow. Fantastic Peice. Glad I Read It. GPhD.


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
very powerful, lots of feeling very nice indeed.


On Tuesday September 23rd, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
This is superb. Had to read it several times to take it all in. There is such depth and mystery lurking beneath the surface. Chilling and calming at the same time.Definitely may favorite from you.


On Monday September 22nd, 2003, trowasrevolution (51) writes:
wow i'm so moved and i definately can relate to how you feel in this poem. this poem kinda just struck me like a dagger in ther heart. i really and honestly am loving your work. -trowa


On Thursday September 18th, 2003, Mauler (6) writes:
Very bittersweet and heartfelt.


On Thursday September 18th, 2003, urbanhumility (1356) writes:
incredibly deep my friend, for some reason i started to watery eyes, there is a sense of melencholy, an underlying theme that is escaping me, but am feeling.......excellent prose truly moved...........urban


On Thursday September 18th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:
thank you..ur comments are most always welcome.



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