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Symphony In The Sky

The symphony she hears
is that of his heart,
'what a perfect moment to live,'
she thought...
the moon can't beat
the brightness of his eyes
and the sea can't win
over his wildest side.
He plays her hair
as if he painted a masterpiece
no Da Vinci could top
and certainly no Picasso
could mess up.
"Magnificat", he said at loud,
"is that musical piece Bach wrote,"
'that's the way i see her,'
he thought...
sensual in her esence,
beauty in her trait,
winds as they touch her
cannot help but shake.
'How can agony be so bittersweet?'
They both meet the thought...
the melody now is
a distant one,
as rain from the sky
screams back at a rising sun.
This is how it must be,
they conclude...
this love that
deliciously pours
throughout,
also drowns us whole
inside and out.
As violins and cellos
stop
the sky aswell slumbers...
as each of all its stars just
drop.

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On Friday December 9th, 2005, Sin (1635) writes:

there is nothing i can say that hasnt already been said...thank you for sharing this utterly lovely piece ~kristy

On Saturday December 11th, 2004, Velvet_Raventon (693) writes:

Ohh what can I say... Delicious to read... ~V.

On Friday October 1st, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (181) writes:

Yes. "What A Perfect Moment To Live". Thats A Great Line That Just Leads To The Rest Of A Great Write. Nice. GPhD.

On Friday June 4th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

I've read this piece before and I fell in love with it,Im suprised I haven't commented already...just...wow..this piece is so magnificantly crafted..I could almost hear the music as I read this...im truly awed by it.Amazing work..Butterfly..xxx...

On Tuesday January 20th, 2004, xburninmystarsx (11) writes:

*wow*

On Thursday January 15th, 2004, Daemonicus (639) writes:

jeez, just amazing

On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Exodus (211) writes:

Extremely Beautiful...i really like it...Great Work!

On Monday October 27th, 2003, Drea (935) writes:

"the moon can't beat the brightness of his eyes and the sea can't win over his wildest side." Vel told me about this poem and i had to check it out. and i'm floored. truely heart warming, and romantic. you have made my heart smile ~Drea~

On Monday October 27th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

" The symphony she hears is that of his heart"...I have not read many pieces here that have touched me as this has...it beckoned and awoke the deep romantic inside of me..and pulled me to life with a silken fist..this is indeed a masterpiece...*applauds

On Sunday September 28th, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

very romantic, this poem carried me away and lulled me into an euphoric state. you are fantastic.

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, Twilight (2104) writes:

this is absolutely amazing. you are extremely talented

On Sunday June 8th, 2003, Aurora_Light (567) writes:

wow this is awesome! i love it

On Saturday June 7th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (689) writes:

Beautiful imagry in this piece - I enjoyed it very much. I love your first two lines, "The symphony she hears is that of his heart" - very romantic. Ciao, T/S

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, manywalks (952) writes:

Simple, understated, beauty and art.

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Love the last five lines. Great image and feeling!

On Monday May 12th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

Your comparisons are greater than any words of praise I could ever offer. Absolutely beatiful. You're definately on my favorites list.

On Monday May 12th, 2003, diavolessa (275) writes:

This is truly beautiful! perfect I would dare say! <3darkside!

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

A materpiece indeed. I must say it has been quite a while since a piece captured my heart. This poem speaks a lot of emotion and is an excellent write on your behalf.-Kefka

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

As violins and cellos stop the sky aswell slumbers... as each of all its stars just drop. THIS IS TRUELY A MASTERPIECE! It is a symphonic opera; your words created the music; BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO!

On Wednesday May 7th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

thank u...your comments are profound and touching.

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

"This is how it must be, they conclude... this love that deliciously pours throughout, also drowns us whole inside and out." Tears swell from my eyes, and I can hear the distant echo of a soft cello reverberate the sadness...

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

They both meet the thought... the melody now is a distant one, as rain from the sky screams back at a rising sun. "I can hear soft piano notes dripping like rain after a storm!"

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

'How can agony be so bittersweet?' So true, and such a bohemian rhapsody if I may borrow from Freddie Mercury, that the bittersweet can be agony? This is profound, and the symphony is now at the height of Mt. Olympus.

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

"Magnificat"...is that musical piece Bach wrote," Magnificat in D Major - Masses and Magnificat Settings... Magnificat anima mea Dominum...Et exsultavit spiritus meus in Deo salutari meo....EXCELLENT!

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

"Magnificat", he said at loud, "Magnificat", I say at loud!"

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

the moon can't beat the brightness of his eyes and the sea can't win over his wildest side. "this does paint the the illustration of tragic love; faraway, so close...as the moon pulls for the desire of the sea"

On Tuesday May 6th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:

The symphony she hears is that of his heart, 'what a perfect moment to live,' she thought... this does make my heart feel the symphony of the perfect moments to live and to hear...

On Monday May 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (94) writes:

this piece was seriously fucking cool!

On Monday May 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:

Haha I agree- fuckin' cool! Awesome write.

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, DoctorAsh (508) writes:

wow, wonderful write`

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, shadowsinthelight (211) writes:

My answer is D, all the above. Enjoyed this, well done, S.

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:

the subject of the poem must be truly beautiful for you to write about them this way ...keep writing ~CFS

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

Really beautiful.

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

lovely, finished this off well.. It really gives the piece a sense of closure.

On Sunday May 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

That last 5 lines are really beautiful. Good writing.

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