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Paisage

Shame in your eyes
is an empty view
Countless supernovas
of stars that fall from you...
Blank pages
fed with drying seas
And an unfateful sun
that carelessly just leaves...
Besides the distance of time
I sit to watch my view....
This life I dreamt
torn inside of you.

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On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

The opening says it all. This may be short, but you managed to capture the simplicity AND depth behind this emotion in a perfect manner. I'm glad I stumbled upon it!

On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, OLd SouL (838) writes:

fantastic.

On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, happymurderer (203) writes:

Wow. This is deep...

On Wednesday September 10th, 2003, urbanhumility (1348) writes:

brilliant, the depth that carries on in your words is profound....you always seem to impress me Maddin.....a true poet you are............urban

On Thursday June 5th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:

"torn inside of you." And again, u r a Featured Poet! I'm so jealous, but not distressed. I'm proud for u, 2. ever c Donnie Darko? mesmorizing movie - cellar doors.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:

Love it. I got chills as your words painted images in my mind.

On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:

god, this is so enigmatic and failing. MF said it well. Words that leave me wanting more. Awesome

On Monday April 28th, 2003, DoctorAsh (507) writes:

i had to read over this one a few times .. your prospecive on "him"?, it's like trying to look into a box that does not open ... i like this, nicely done

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