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By the clear pure moon
I sit....and wonder
how can you be so beautiful
through my eyes
without me seeing you...
how can you even touch me
without you reaching me?
Coffee spills
from my coffee cup....
you knocked my door
without me hearing it.

Soon the night will trade
vainly all its stars
for an unworthy sun
pretencious in its light...
And your thoughts
keep kissing gently my mind...
the lips i havent tasted
are worthy to recall.

The smell of coffee breaks
your esence in the world,
deceiving the mighty sky
and all the 7 seas,
hiding from my presence,
but finding you still
where God exposes you...
in the time and place
of coffee makin'....
in the time and place
of love makin'....
your night
that also shares
my night.

The star i choose to see
may not be your choice,
but always stares at you
as you close your eyes...
'till the night
slowly walks away
with all its satellites
that brightly communicate
and surrenders
not on a rising day,
but on both of us.



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On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Sin (1622) writes:
this is so soft and elegantly portrayed...my heart did a funny little flip flop as i read yet i couldnt deny the underlying note of sadness..or maybe im just flawed to always see the tragic..but this was deeply enjoyed, thank you for sharing it ~kristy


On Sunday October 3rd, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:
That is really good. i like it. Heather Gurlwhoneeds2bfree


On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Cinn (187) writes:
this is such a pretty poem very heartfelt good write


On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:
I tried to write something similar to this but it didn't come out right.. I'm glad it didn't.. because I found this. And it delves deeper than I could ever convey. :::OLd


On Thursday February 5th, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:
I love how you bring the fantasy to a real-life setting and still hold its magic. Loving something you've never had... I know I've been able to relate to that. Nice work beautiful.


On Saturday January 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (20) writes:
so sorrowful.


On Wednesday May 14th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
as this is sad, too it is beautiful... as above, so below. "...for an unworthy sun pretencious in its light... "


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:
this is totally romantic, good stuff. I stopped to read it more than once because I liked it so much.


On Wednesday April 30th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
same;)


On Sunday April 27th, 2003, MindRape (861) writes:
oh! my heart skipped a beat or two :) GOOD WRITE! such a romanitc point of view :)


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (28) writes:
wonderful poem... i enjoyed reading it... congrats on the good write!*Chelsie*


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, liquid_emotion (417) writes:
wow.... you live at night, through it... and it is lovely and beautiful to behold.... but so very empty afterwards. This is a damn good poem.


On Saturday April 26th, 2003, Bast (895) writes:
very prettily written... i love it.



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