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Consummated

(This is the first time I have tried this style...and I think it works
..ah what the hell..it feels good anyways...lol)

Spinning madly in this
Cyclonic confusion
Blinding delusion

Evokes
Carnal attraction
Electric reaction

Sparks
Consuming fire
My funeral pyre

Farewell to all that was
Once my soul
No more whole

Abandon
This empty shell
Nowhere to dwell

Vacate
Memory hall
Raze all

Surrender
To insanity's abyss
Such ludicrous bliss

Sink into the

Ebbing tide
Ultimate ride

...Consummated...

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On Friday June 20th, 2008, Bluegirl (243) writes:

I am not usually much for rhyming poetry, but this was done quite well! :)

On Sunday August 13th, 2006, Kinkypoptart (755) writes:

wow... amazing. this one's definitely a favorite. Great write ~*~tart~*~

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, Drea (917) writes:

"Surrender To insanity's abyss Such ludicrous bliss" i love those lines.. this is wonderful. i really enjoyed this.. ~Drea~

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