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"Descent into Insanity" by urban_angel

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Beautiful thunder, drown out the rain

Wondrous clamor, obscuring the sane

Longing for a portrait, reminiscent of the past

Appealing for a drop of devotion, one that may just last

Surreptitious riddled mind, exceeding moral edge

Inducing vicious lies, persuade me towards the ledge

Catastrophic trials, skulk within my writhing head

Depraved and fiendish demons, awaiting to be fed

Delay my impending departure, remain a bit more still

Bend back, slit eyes, and cower, the blood, too soon, will spill.




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On Tuesday December 11th, 2007, Unforgotten (153) writes:
Insanity? I'm in. And the beat helped too. Nice


On Friday June 16th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:
"Inducing vicious lies, persuade me towards the legde" the rhythm in this is truly flawless. and your choise of words to portray the feeling of being pushed too fucking hard and much too far....was just perfect.


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:
"Surreptitious riddled mind, exceeding moral edge Inducing vicious lies, persuade me towards the ledge" i'm really glad i clicked on this..it had such a nice, smooth rhyme to it,never sounding forced and always parallel to each following line.


On Friday June 16th, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:
also, the diction and images were really good for your message here. "blood, too soon, will spill". wonderful write.



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