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A transparent roadkill charming it's way to my bed

Campsite panorama, our endless strain,
Favorite ringtones downspin vigorously
Realisation repeat distraction revealing exaggerated prime
- bloom melodrama
Mesmeric this silent spell; A plastic lure
Collectable item not to be traded [Driftwood]
Secretly clawed away in umbral indulgance
I hug myself in closure

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On Friday May 30th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (419) writes:

I'm not entirely sure I "get" it but I am entirely sure I like it.

On Sunday June 24th, 2007, stormtalk (909) writes:

bananamanstrikesagain

On Monday June 18th, 2007, urbanhumility (1351) writes:

articulate.......in direction and feeling...........well done

On Saturday June 16th, 2007, sIo (891) writes:

the part about driftwood and hugging yourself in closure...i love the closure line thats the best. the rest is jumbled but makes for a very nice thing to ATTEMPT to visualize.

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, blue (1749) writes:

I.. umm. I dont get it. o.O)) oop. ~b

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Solace (1424) writes:

Favourite monotony - explosion convulsions and mania - beyond human, far beyond distraction (victimless myopathy) more real than reality - stick in hand, beach combing phantasia to a degree of fallacy...

On Tuesday May 22nd, 2007, Solace (1424) writes:

Favourite ringtone is silence, the silent spell of silence itelf - contemplate contemplation by the river and float on...some things are too important to have a price...this is fantastic

On Friday May 18th, 2007, Mab (1021) writes:

*feeds the monkey a banana* excellent!~Meg

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, dying angel (1343) writes:

i think anth said it all. the title is compelling. "I hug myself in closure"..i love these types of writes. short, but blunt.

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, verablue (162) writes:

the title sucked me in right away. brilliant word choice.

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1653) writes:

Bloody magnificent!! If I had room on my account this would be an instant fave. This rocks like a raging bitch on heat with clawhammer. Fuckin' nice! -Carl

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Alanarchy (1600) writes:

Utterly crushing.

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:

this work demands comments.. so here is my one comment. life can be a series of stepping stones, look forward and make sure one of them is not a turtle, because it doesnt matter if you fall, just dont hurt the turtle *wind kick*

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, anth (1611) writes:

i can only describe this poem as an implosion, a singularity of words condensed so tightly from a million thoughts into something so neat, its after youve read this that it explodes.

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, anth (1611) writes:

an embrace so close that it is a star folding into itself. theres almost anger in this, in its quiet intensity, and yet a feeling of utter randomness, its all so much juxtaposition that i feel i either cannot work this poem out, or know it so intimately,

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, anth (1611) writes:

it was like i was sitting on a train at night at the bck watching a group of people at the other end, thoughts without words, this poem captures everything and nothing in that most sublime way

On Thursday May 17th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2406) writes:

bit like shadow boxing with words; the end seems to suggest a lonely agent, or maybe a thought process of isolated subconcious discovery...?

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