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Gold wrapped Memory scorn

Night time was the dream of details, claiming mind over matter
Befriended, man hunts his pray
And just knowing that you had to disagree, made it all seem brighter
Every breath lies; A simularity
Forcing me to obtain, distressful faces of personal revelations

Deluded subterfuge
Inclined seduction
Cold brush of aspiration weave,
Curtain fall, kiss - Domino conjunction

And on the forth day she told him, this is not what I had in mind

Fiddle of amber; Blind sight companion
Adjust the speech of your master
A tricksters tribute
A knight oh so valliant

Dog of hospice, hospital Erato.

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On Sunday June 17th, 2007, sIo (893) writes:

the first line, and 'dog of hospice' you always have such prominent thoughts in your poetry. honestly i may not understand the entire thing but i take from it something i never would have being on my own...

On Sunday June 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1604) writes:

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On Thursday June 14th, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Mesmerizing... loved the "on the fourth day".. Intriguing use of vocabulary... Now i'm going to reread it and continue futile efforts to comprehend

On Sunday June 3rd, 2007, elisa (1995) writes:

a mime in motion.... '...Dog of hospice, hospital Erato. .' ....ergo... Poet of hospice, hospital Muse..... your words always penetrate.

On Wednesday May 16th, 2007, glasshouse (803) writes:

I dont get the ending. But I love the "Fiddle of amber" stanza. You know you've got it. --Jes

On Tuesday April 3rd, 2007, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:

I've visited your page about 3 times and, everytime I did, I read this poem and felt different things as I was reading it. And, after reading it for the fourth time, I still can't put those feelings into words. I really like this one...

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1162) writes:

elegent with a twist of sadistic iorny, loved it, WRITE MORE!

On Saturday January 13th, 2007, Sin (1635) writes:

you have a unique use of vocabulary that catches the eye and intrigues..and the images and messages it conveys are just as wonderful..you have depth my friend ~kristy

On Saturday January 13th, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1850) writes:

Now this is a real comment.. *Runs off screaming*

On Friday October 20th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:

unique and penetrating, the language you use makes it whimsically vibrant, though also concrete. plus I love the word subterfuge and major points for incorporating such an awesome word!

On Sunday October 8th, 2006, NikesRain (1501) writes:

the language and flow of this is wonderful, elegant and sweeping as it tumbles through and around the mind, provoking thought and reflection... *cheers*

On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, urbanhumility (1334) writes:

abstract......metaphors.....drawing one in......................well done................urban

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