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Joked Heel

Caterpillar seek electric refuge
Feel; Pedestal meditation, steel forsaken, mistaken
Drawn by beam and glance of heel
Joking as we drift by vertical
Crystal tear on ravens back
Guided by the weaver
I kiss the wyld and fistfuck the wyrm of torment

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On Tuesday October 9th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2392) writes:

Happy Birthday Monkey Madness....perhaps this poem best sums up a good ole fashioned knees up Rumba Jumba Gumbo party! Pass the doob....

On Sunday August 12th, 2007, Mylissa (1088) writes:

The ending is a stunning symphony, it still is thread within my ear. You leave me thirsty for more.

On Sunday June 24th, 2007, carlosjackal (1604) writes:

"Crystal tear on ravens back" What a line and what a surreal mind-fuck this is. Brilliant. -Carl

On Friday October 20th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:

wonderuflly odd (but totally working) rhythm.

On Tuesday July 4th, 2006, Clementine (153) writes:

i love to fistfuck wyrms and worms and worries....you speak to me like an old sermun...if you ever come to NYC lets fuck...jamacan style

On Friday October 20th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:

this a hot comment.

On Saturday May 20th, 2006, knightmirror (425) writes:

you always know how to say so much with not saying really that much...this is an amazing write brother full of creativity and wordplay....always a pleasure to read your works....-chris

On Wednesday May 17th, 2006, Aurora_Light (567) writes:

wow i love the line "Crystal tear on ravens back" it hit me and held a meaning to me, maybe not the meaning you intended but meaning all the same. it's good to see you are still writeing

On Monday May 15th, 2006, Guillotine (229) writes:

twas brillig and the slimy toves to gyre and gimble in the wabe.

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, saintedmad (1055) writes:

twas brillig.ness.. ..such the jabberwock; this meanderingly maddens the mind and softstrokes the subconcious soul into a full throbbing submission; THOSE INGENIOUS IMAGES>>> [incredible] ness

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Guillotine (229) writes:

well, solace confused me so i'll lay it straight. I. Like. This. ~Guill

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Solace (1422) writes:

What to say? Where to disseminate, extrapolate, perhaps i'll just procrastinate? Pedestrian meditation i thought at first, this caterpillar smiles

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Solace (1422) writes:

You walk with a tinge of traditionalism, and a speckle of new wisdom - fresh eyes on old things - a marriage i adorn with my praise...

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (510) writes:

this danced off my tongue in a strangely catchy beat, the preciseness of your words and the incredible individuality of your perception, is an amazing thing to find.

On Sunday May 14th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2392) writes:

holy fuck originality - unusally composed a kind of surreal symmetry that shatters pre-conceived notions of language -- nice one!!!

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