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Pulse

Manifest blindsight
Sealed signature
You gave to withdraw
Pulse, starblind serenity

Gather the kindred, a new age has begone
Concealed mindworm. Yes we hold the power, drained
Before the afterflight.
Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom

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On Thursday July 26th, 2007, Petra Creffield (41) writes:

smoorh criminal lyrics awesome!! - never really heard them till u posted them wow! amazings - this one short sweet n beautifl and serene :) Px!!!

On Sunday June 17th, 2007, carlosjackal (1612) writes:

Ah, fantastic fantasticals woven tight, the blood pumping quick through veins, the music on fire, us all victorious, us all as one. 8 lines of Top Draw Poetics =)

On Saturday January 13th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

you express wisdom so flawlessly...and there is such beauty in the simplictic complexity of it...wonderfully done ~kristy

On Tuesday May 16th, 2006, Magic Hatter (2380) writes:

new age narcisstic tosh. My kind of write.

On Monday November 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Amazing! Everything about it.

On Monday November 7th, 2005, An Expired Member (27) writes:

I can't really describe the feeling I had when I read this poem... but it caught me for some unknown reason. Thank you

On Monday July 4th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:

you write in a complex simplicity,,,i like the articulate foundation. an Exquisite Write.....L.D....

On Saturday February 26th, 2005, Angst Queen (472) writes:

You're rather amazing. The lines you used were well placed, well used throughout

On Thursday December 16th, 2004, frozen (756) writes:

awesome write

On Monday November 8th, 2004, Valentine (513) writes:

"Yes we hold the power, drained Before the afterflight. Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" ~ Sensational! . . atmospheric and absolute sublimity. ~ Rose

On Friday November 5th, 2004, DarkWolf (454) writes:

This is wicked.. i like it.. very much.. "Gather the kindred, a new age has begone" excellent line there.. -Michael

On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

Ohh yea. I should comment on the poem itself. Hmm you have a way of making me not do that ... Well its gooooooood. And hmm ... no dude this write is too intimate you like. I cant do it ... laters maybe. -Nadir-

On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

So stop looking back; and looking in others to define. Or bloom there. I dont know, and I sure dont know anymore. So thats a place to start. To hell with security in things; we needed say that more often.

On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

Thats all I know, and that was found the hard way ... didnt we? *grins* You will find your pulse, maybe you did long ago. Because it is there to me, and allways has. -Nadir-

On Monday July 12th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

The energy flowing through this is sensational. I love how vivid this write has become in my mind. The title fits just right. Wonderful, Monkey.

On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Lynaes (1148) writes:

A true work of art.. you speak such wisdom, and your wording is incredible. "Pulse, starblind serenity".. gave me a certain feeling, something stirring.. atmospheric.. Wonderful work monkey. *gives you a banana*

On Friday June 25th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

ballons masquerade like dancing doorbell china, and id fuck you

On Friday June 25th, 2004, glasshouse (812) writes:

"Mold my inner rhyme, the beat in bloom" I love that. Short but far from simple. Good write. -Glass

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (284) writes:

As is usually the case, I don't know what the hell you're talking about, but the feelings it creates seem to make sense. Does that make sense? Nothing makes sense. Enyway, great as usual, Monkeyman ;)

On Monday June 14th, 2004, worm (133) writes:

"beat poetry" at it's best! DM kicks ass once again... nicely done, my friend, nicely done!

On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, aXe FactoR (432) writes:

short,sweet, neat & meaningful at the same time. awesome. -MeL-

On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, urbanhumility (1325) writes:

you bring forth a new genre of thought, beautiful and wise..............urban

On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, Nadir (631) writes:

Yes god damnit, stupid fish that wants to swallow, you hold more inside without, but also with; There all the power to the ones that look futher then a gathering *raising a hand* Tiger

On Tuesday June 1st, 2004, _Andrew_ (302) writes:

well done peter, i like how you weaved this small piece and i especially love how it closed as well; leaves me with a sense of compassion.

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:

...I can't believe you ever thought of giving up writing...this is..just..brilliant...What the hell took me so long to read this?!..Cara..xxx...

On Friday May 28th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:

Im slow...and stupid..and,well..blonde (if that counts as any excuse),and so i still haven't read most of your new work...but this was the most pefect way to re-introduce myself to your work...

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Storm (186) writes:

and brilliant. Helt underbar min danske vän, underbar!

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Storm (186) writes:

This is one of those poems where the sentences are in them self perfect and with eachother create a collage of many thoughts in one. Everytime I read it I believe to have found the REAL meaning and everytime am I convinced I was wrong. Intriguing and bril

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:

*slap* you crazy monkey, you...Few capture my attention these days...I've become an elitist in the halls of Dp, refusing to dole out my time to any who i dont appreciate...You have my time :)

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:

"You gave to withdraw" "New age has begone" "Mold my inner ryhme" Stuck with these phrases, these reference points to satiate my desire for something more than mundane, something profound...

On Monday May 17th, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

_Peter,this gave me goosebumps..."mold my inner rhyme.the beat in bloom" really spoke to me.i'm sorry...as always,you have left me wordless.thankyou.:)tim

On Monday May 17th, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (183) writes:

This Was Good Although I must Admit That My Poet-Radar-Recognition Programme Has Not Bee Used In A Long Time. GPhD.

On Monday May 17th, 2004, BleedSilver (377) writes:

You can almost feel a beating heart, bleeding in your palm...So short, But deep. I am sure I missed something. *goes back to read again*~Mikey

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Midnight Shadow (90) writes:

'Gather the kindred' That statement brings about so many different thoughts. Short, but altogether wonderful poem Peter. *hugs* ~Tracy~

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Mute Serenade (216) writes:

starblind serenity.... beautiful. awesome write.... -Sue

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, capt_funguy (1006) writes:

reads like an accusation ... reads from a pulpit of vision ... a welcome scolding for betterment ....lol .. great work man ... funguy

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, anth (1621) writes:

i like this, as if you described the shapeless thoughts that give birth to everything that come from where?and the thought here is of a united state of mind, to rise

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, girlafraid (581) writes:

"concealed mindworm"-i like every word of this...something being born within...thats how the last line strikes me...

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