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Homogeneous presence

I downfall, Inclosure

Ignis fatuus, floating digest
Driven citylights
In plated obsession

I race my hand
Acknowlede one' presence

Tin can of maggots
Womb of insecurity
Dream beings, healing depth

Doubt; A shiver yet spineless
Prayer beads on holy ground

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On Saturday August 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (13) writes:

Phenominal. I want to go to sleep and dream this poem.

On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:

jesus...you dont mince words...everyone of your writes are like bullets, you blow my mind Monkey man ~kristy

On Monday November 28th, 2005, Grim_Sorrow (87) writes:

Leaves much to the imagination... Love it

On Sunday July 11th, 2004, Lynaes (1138) writes:

"Tin can of maggots Womb of insecurity Dream beings, healing depth" so thick with imagery and force.. the way you word things is exquisite, and this has wrought me speechless.

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2189) writes:

I think this has a wonderful flow...it's just so graceful...I love your choice of words...it makes my mind's eye work like mad to make images to match everything you speak of. Nice.

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, urbanhumility (1332) writes:

internal meaning, beautiful prose......so very well done......urban

On Monday April 12th, 2004, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

oooh, another mind-twister. this one is really good for that, great job on this excellent piece.

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:

Brilliant. Poetry that makes you think. My mind is feeling something (it hasn't in a while) a tingling sensation. Monkey, you're awesome..such talent (not shocked) ^_^

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Aurora_Light (565) writes:

i can say nothing more than this i agree and thank u

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

"Dream beings, healing depth "...the deoth we all long to find....but are these beings really coexsisting with us?..awesome piece my danish, Danish!!

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

hehe...funguy was right with the trance food, and it was indeed delectable :) sweet write, dude...loved it ^_^

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Solace (1423) writes:

The prayer beads fall lifeless in my head, dropping lonely to the ground...

On Sunday April 11th, 2004, Solace (1423) writes:

I race my hand... Fractured and yet my mind takes heed and wanders/ponders on so much over so little, little in the way of length, but with so much more inside the words, inside the meaning

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

this is trance food ... the brain dosage directions ... steering to a possible crash before waking ... eyes open , nervous and disposessed - don't believe me? ... then say whoops .. i didn't realize i made a weapon ... nice job monkey man ,,, nice job .f

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, capt_funguy (1002) writes:

glad to see you bending brains again ... funguy

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, worm (131) writes:

DM... a flash of brilliance! metaphors abound! one thing though... what does "Ignis fatuus" mean? (please enlighten the dummy!)

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, purr_verse (1438) writes:

'ignis fatuus' = 'the foolish fire' :) one of my favourite little latin moments... This piece is great; i like capt's comment of 'trance food'... i agree... very nicely done.

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, Drea (937) writes:

"Tin can of maggots/Womb of insecurity" I really liked Monkey. Nice to see your block was broken.

On Saturday April 10th, 2004, knightmirror (425) writes:

monkey my man you haven't lost a single thing since your last post.*tin can of maggots womb of insecurity*fucking brilliant my friend,fucking brilliant.****well deserved.much love-chris

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