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Arise within devotion

Upon snowcovered burial grounds,
To take back what is missing; Dance!

In depth to the fast and swift in motion

And I cry
As I turn my back
Against her lies

Multiple movement makes me shift to another

(Such beauty found in dreams
I know of this but I long for another day)

To sense this reality
Arise within , devotion.

Multiple goodwill, Time for the hunt and time for the kill.

Upon mother earth her childrens blood we spill
To gain more, into her womb we drill. The core

With a sense of abdication we look upon you, green eyes. together we might.

Never told
But yes
There is a link
The afterlife
You in time
Never guess
Allways know
Never be
Forever in stillness
I wont cry for you my friend
But
I cast beauty on thy grave
Bid thee farewell
Travel as you wish
I am not strong enough
To follow you
Not now
Maybe tomorrow

Wings of distance longing takes flight
We walk upon waves collided; Dance

My devotion towards you desided

Wanting to touch vanity
You came to me, Dance into sanity

(Dedicated to Purr, may her happiness last forever)

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On Sunday August 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1612) writes:

=) *grins Cheshire cat-like* This was buzzing and the whole burial imagery at the start and finish was exceptional. *dances*

On Sunday March 4th, 2007, purr_verse (1483) writes:

Ahhh... :D ever divine; I come here all the time.

On Wednesday October 5th, 2005, vaultgrl (239) writes:

....wow...."green eyes together we might....I cast beauty on thy grave"....beautifully expressed.....*runs off to read again*....

On Sunday February 6th, 2005, flying_fox (801) writes:

oh my.. this is magnificent, and what a special dedication. How wonderful of you to do this.

On Thursday January 27th, 2005, Sepulcrawl (106) writes:

I've got to hand it to you, this is completely compelling. I'm not awestruck, but I am, at least, stricken with this terrible desire dig up someone's bones. -pxc

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

Again...it forced me to tears..."Upon mother earth her childrens blood we spill"...I love that line...so wrought with our sadistic reality.

On Wednesday April 21st, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

'Upon snowcovered burial grounds' drenched with magnificence, this work of words'art ... it dances w/ waves evocative& lucid...'into sanity'...

On Thursday April 15th, 2004, Zophiel (356) writes:

must say I the duality in meaning for each line

On Monday April 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:

..is...knocked...speechless. Fantastic piece. Had me from the second line, absolute. *dancing* :)

On Monday April 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1483) writes:

*faveclicks*

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

Powerfull like a dream quest, flashing powerful visions given in ordered state, the mind shifts easily from one phrase to the next, you can sense the desire to be true, but the true haunting failure to stand against all that is now.

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, An Expired Member (19) writes:

Regret and betrayal of self at the end and loss never ending. Full of truely human spirit....

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

That's so depressing...it almost made me cry. You have a way with words.

On Saturday March 6th, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (195) writes:

Beautiful and ellegant, you put this piece together wonderfully, great job ~Emptyness~

On Saturday February 21st, 2004, _Andrew_ (302) writes:

*busts a techno rhyme*

On Friday February 20th, 2004, An Expired Member (40) writes:

"Yes, there is a link" This was magnificant. I'm definitely a fan. -Doll

On Sunday February 8th, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm (696) writes:

Wonderful feel and flow to this piece - meandering, yet coherent. Good one! Ciao, T/S

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:

...fucking awesome,Peter.the final 3 stanzas finish this up quite well.thanks,Peter.:)tim

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, An Expired Member (17) writes:

*points to monkey i want HIM to write all my english papers...awesome write...think ill cry now *uses my magick to award you the nana that is never able to be finished and dont bruise! lol* *huggs* ~LEAH

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Lemons (58) writes:

::dances::

On Sunday February 1st, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1880) writes:

sweet :O)

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:

ps Sorry about being critical, but i expect the same from you :) Hurry up and write more like this :P I'm way too impatient and drunk...

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:

Now the actual comment... That was a saunter through a depth rarely plumbed by most of us petty mortals, akin to a godlike poem, prophecy for instance lies this piece... Allways, always

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Solace (1420) writes:

Monkey, i just thought i'd ruin your good work :) or make it better... Barrial is burial, beaty is beauty and woomb is womb :)

On Saturday January 31st, 2004, Storm (186) writes:

Oh this was real good Monk. To dance.. and you spoke of us exploting Mother Earth aswell. You have a good rythm. Thank you.~S

On Friday January 30th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (349) writes:

Great poem, it seems that I have never read a poem of yours that has been sub-par. Really great..+T.P.U+

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:

This made me feel like being trapped in serenity while the winds of chaos tear everything down around me. Hmm, very calming, yet maddening, piece. Awsome. ~Ryan

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Jonas (885) writes:

i don't think this'n is the one you wanted read... but i'm glad i stumbled upon it... quite a crystaline beauty to it... like the moment you touch it it will shatter.

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1880) writes:

damn.. nice comment.. cous thats exactly the feel i wanted to make.. sweetness

On Friday January 30th, 2004, BleedSilver (377) writes:

Not enough nanas indeed...."Time for the hunt and time for the kill.Upon mother earth her childrens blood we spill" was a great line...Tells about the inbred violence in all of us. good one...-Mike

On Friday January 30th, 2004, OLd SouL (848) writes:

There are not enough bananas in the jungle to award you for this piece. :) :::OLd

On Friday January 30th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1880) writes:

I guess that meant you like it.. :oD

On Friday January 30th, 2004, OLd SouL (848) writes:

not too bad for a monkey. :P

On Friday January 30th, 2004, sweetambrosia (104) writes:

Beautiful... yet another great one from the master! "We walk upon waves collided" love that! --sweets

On Saturday April 3rd, 2004, anth (1621) writes:

wow such mastery of words and hidden layers , so deep and exotic yet familiar, beautiful seems to slow the pace of life as you read and take in its wisdom

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