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Heredity

Search the shininest star,
Unknowing innocent eyes,
If you wish of one to guide,
You must travel life;

Wisemen saw the path,
Nature tells you of lust,
Find the strength,
Bearer of trust,
Rock the cradle,
Blend your tears,
A honest start
To share your heart.

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On Sunday July 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1615) writes:

=) Magnifico! Much wisdom in this small collection of words. -Carl

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:

very graceful for an impudent fellow like you *throws frisbee banana's your way*

On Thursday March 29th, 2007, Sin (1646) writes:

i agree with June...gorgeous..*leaves you nanas*

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, wonderlandhysteria (2184) writes:

This is gorgeous...inspiring. "Blend your tears"...I love that.

On Saturday January 17th, 2004, Evil (551) writes:

This is awesome. *hugs* now you owe me a kiss._-=Evil=-_

On Sunday March 14th, 2004, SilentStalker (1318) writes:

...hey, if he doesn't pay up, you can collect from me...hehe...

On Wednesday March 17th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1862) writes:

you .. get away now...

On Friday January 16th, 2004, Storm (185) writes:

This was good, I liked when you split it up into two pieces with different rythms. First part was very striking. ~Storm

On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, stormtalk (912) writes:

I've always been conflicted about the dichotomy of experience and knowledge. On the one hand, it's stupid to go and do something after someone tells you they've done it and it didn't work out well...

On Tuesday January 13th, 2004, stormtalk (912) writes:

...but on the other, you might have a different experience than they. For the most part, though, I think the problem is that most people just don't listen well.

On Wednesday December 10th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

There's one way to describe your work, and that is meaningful. Concise and meaningful. Well done.

On Tuesday November 18th, 2003, sole (114) writes:

To me, this poem is about not having anything handed to you. You can inherit alot of things, but the one thing you can't is the experience that living life brings. Nice poem I enjoyed it.

On Friday November 7th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:

It's hard to open up after you've been pushed down so many times. But this is true...you must first experience to learn. It's just the getting over the fear of experiencing things that's the hard part...

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Differnece between you and me, you can do it with so little, whereas i need a lot..-Kefka

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Aurora_Light (564) writes:

a great write froma great guy, wonderful job monkey, truely a write that fits my mood (dont ask)

On Thursday November 6th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

Bravo monkey, you have yet to let me down each piece a treasure...

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:

nice..vary nice..i think ill read more ofyour work.~~~Grave

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:

...this makes me feel all warm and cozy inside...I can't be evil when I'm feeling warm and cozy...stop it now!...no, really, good job...I think Hate said it best... -Darun

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:

...and there goes Urban, trying to make the comments once again longer than the poem itself...you always have a way of making people do that, you know...?

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, SilentStalker (1318) writes:

...dammit, how'd you fool me into doing it...? you sly monkey, you...

On Wednesday November 5th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1862) writes:

:o) silly fuck .. hahaha

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, Lady_Lilith (113) writes:

I wish I could comment like Urban :'( All I can say is that I like this. You say a lot with few words:) *Lilith*

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:

I like this poem monksters...inviting, warm and honest...3 great traits..

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (19) writes:

THis makes me feel warm a fuzzy inside, Beautiful Work!!

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (991) writes:

I like the flow of this one. Seems like it started off calmly and then in the second stanza picked up pace until the last line and ended abruptly.

On Monday November 3rd, 2003, Urban Shipwreck (991) writes:

As for the message my mind received from this- I'm seeing that in order to gain insight and knowledge you have to live, bleed, love, cry, hate, smile. Very nicely done Peter. ~Urban Shipwreck~

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, gothemite (399) writes:

this poem makes me happy

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

well i think ur poems charactrized by deep philosphy , and thats what gives to the poem a deep meaning well done...

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, TheArtOfX (105) writes:

the beginning to this poem is awsome dm. the whole poem is great indeed. another good write. -Art

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