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"Amusing my simplicity. (Watered by rhythmical steps. Part one)" by Dancing_Monkey

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Please accept my vulgar bidding and common effrontery;
Stop the dance.
Find yourself able to look back and forth,
Jestering a time of your desire.
Beg of me nothing and you will be given;
You might find it noticable that this is an offer only given twice.
The first time you declined,
Secluded and safe in your mothers womb.
In your naptive moment or should I say rhythmical prose?
I give you this offer a second time.
 
For I am
Life flawed by suspended animation,

For I am
Ego befitting tainted flesh,

For you have
Given me a third chance.



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On Friday May 30th, 2008, Lipstick Whore (365) writes:
Wow--read and re-read this. Simply beautiful. Elegant and the last three stanzas are simply amazing.


On Monday April 7th, 2008, Solace (1420) writes:
Odd, this is very polite - driven by eloquence. Rhythmical prose well enough. Simplicity easily becomes complexity, the concluding triple is deliciously spoken. Find safety, risk evaluation, let go and sing and soar. Humble piece.


On Tuesday March 25th, 2008, Mab (1096) writes:
this falls nothing short of excellence.I love each and every line and the way your words demand to be read again and again... the ending is the clincher :)


On Monday March 17th, 2008, Alanarchy (1611) writes:
Fuck yeah.


On Monday March 17th, 2008, insideout (63) writes:
Ah to create, what an awesome gift. This is lovely!


On Monday March 17th, 2008, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
Sweet weavings! Honesty, charm and humbleness. You shall be wooing the ladies no problem at all =)


On Monday March 17th, 2008, tangeled (556) writes:
i've had to read this several times to find a comment appropriate for it. its so beautiful in its brutal upforth truth yet so soft in the conclusion of the anger turning to a sincere gratitude for the chances you'd been given as well. 'a perfect circle' painted perfectly. very well done peter. *bows* much respect brother. peace love and harmonies...~ta~


On Sunday March 16th, 2008, elisa (1985) writes:
refined taste... subtle in charm .. yet perfectly conveyed. love it my monkey:)


On Saturday March 15th, 2008, saintedmad (993) writes:
a perplexing thing; 'back and forth' of ignorance and bliss. . ..of so many of life's contrasts; choices we make or unmake can choose us instead. ... i like the stop/still images. ..ness


On Saturday March 15th, 2008, silent circus (400) writes:
....uhg, chances, i like it .....good write, as usual. how is it possible for a mastermind like you not to write somthing good, without meaning,,,,very very nice



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