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Before the weeping fountain.
You strike me down with quick decision;

The night table.
A shrine of cheap perfumes and the best of K.Y Jelly And Astroglide,
Anything for the ladies.
"I wont ignore your poetry and golden tubes" The slight nod of
Secrets shared was spotted by a drifter in your womb, bringing the melody to the flesh. I dare not share, what he told me
Never the jam, my piano necktie couldent stir
These are the stitches, I beg you seize this embrace
Back tattooed with Jesus on the cross, make the captain think twice before whiping me the colour of milk.
Luckely the pills put in our drinks did not turn out a worse case scenario. It did cause a more open minded sexual act.
I was sitting on a milestone.
Turning the wedding ring on my finger, still thinking about;

A house haunted.




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On Tuesday October 2nd, 2007, Geisha (787) writes:
This gave me the shivers for some reason, nice write -Airi-hime


On Friday September 21st, 2007, lajeeves (62) writes:
this write, to me , seems so profound in all that it made me feel. it reflects many instances in my own life. it makes me wander of your origans . loved it ~jeeves~


On Wednesday September 12th, 2007, Bakkhus Unbound (1110) writes:
"before whipping me the colour of milk" This is one I'll have to read a few times and ponder over... I like the vividness and the the epic feeling within a short space. And the ending is, well, haunting...


On Friday September 7th, 2007, GoldenLotus (40) writes:
as always...your words stimulate and arouse even deaf ears. GP :)


On Thursday September 6th, 2007, indefined (717) writes:
oh my, the monkey still dances. this is great Peter, I'm going to have to get stoned and come back and read it again.


On Monday August 27th, 2007, Mab (1065) writes:
oh my! forced precision with bent scalpel! you rouse such intensity within your words. the K.Y jelly helped ease the sharp images into my head...you have a very macabre libido m'dear ;)


On Monday August 27th, 2007, Mab (1065) writes:
I would love to whip you the purest shade of white but I am just the ghost behind the wall...


On Saturday August 25th, 2007, King_Crazy_Dave (423) writes:
your world and my world are similar pictures in different colors.


On Friday August 24th, 2007, melinoe (70) writes:
I am reminded of fermented wine.. it makes my eyes water. I shall read more.


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1166) writes:
impressive comment tower. i refuse to indulge..... you are lord goldthrone... this was amazing.


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Solace (1425) writes:
I beg you, pleading precisely a feeling that needs to be fed - then a melvillesque, they hung him up, freakin' hung him up and he died - i'd like that on my back man. That in/fidelity moment fantastic


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Solace (1425) writes:
The precision is forced, it doesn't come by effortless weightlessness airy fairy namby pandering - honesty never did, it comes like a raging torrent, and hits like that whip. Quick decisions - night tables and honesty


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Solace (1425) writes:
Gentleman, are gentlemanly, but they're consummate liars too - every avenue is its own vision, its own little indelible indiction and production - what melody is the melody of the flesh pray tell we ask? You're leaning over the bar


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Solace (1425) writes:
asking, begging for understanding, - how can we give it to you? and did the pills cause, or give excuse to it, all the milestones become weights with which to drown us, and that band another amongst


On Monday August 20th, 2007, Solace (1425) writes:
A house can only truly be haunted, when the life within it impresses upon it that quality - the quality of living - and the horrors that come with just that. The stories they could tell, fathomless.


On Sunday August 19th, 2007, Magic Hatter (2385) writes:
this was totally baffling...whipped the colour of milk ....I can't really think of anything to say....stumped


On Sunday August 19th, 2007, NikesRain (1507) writes:
i'm still trying to wrap my brain around this and come out with something intelligent to say..... it's stirring and provokes another read to take it all in...but the ending... just collapsed my lungs


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, Narcissa (727) writes:
Well - I'm glad its "Anything for the ladies" Keep writing - I love it!


On Saturday August 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (21) writes:
A wonderfully morbid read.. love your stuff!


On Friday August 17th, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
Insist on living it hehe ... Degrade these scenarios these people, endlessly in your mind. It is wondefull to watch and a great laugh. I can not pity it, when everyone is an outsider.


On Friday August 17th, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
And I would not know who to pity most. So it is humor when everyone loss. It is a morbid poem to me, a poem about loss and shadow dancing. It was achieved even befor the ending. Achieved becouse everything was wraped in shadows, and choked...


On Friday August 17th, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
You do that alot, and now I speak strictly to you as a writer not my friend.... Okey I try to, becouse it is hard to seperate. But as a writer I think you are insanely morbid. More so then many would think.


On Friday August 17th, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:
Ohh and a last thing. I liked the summer feel to it. Made it realy wicked. Jonas


On Friday August 17th, 2007, saintedmad (1035) writes:
any vessel [including the body] may be haunted. ...and a hautning act/write indeed. .. . comes fully circular. nessa


On Friday August 17th, 2007, capt_funguy (1002) writes:
think twice? .. i don't think i'll be able to stop thinking about it now ... you amaze me .. spoken so clearly in broken lens snapshot -- haunt my house .... funguy


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1614) writes:
*hugs* This was the bomb..twisting, writhing, sliding from one image to the next in an awesome display of poetics. Fucking superb :) -Carl


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
i agree...this was quite the ride and the beginning images made me laugh...and i couldnt help but picture a drug induced night of kink, i just knew you were a sexual deviant Peter ;)


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, What Limes (167) writes:
snaps.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Mylissa (1116) writes:
oh lovely and brain teasing...tasty it is.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Alanarchy (1638) writes:
Your poetry, to me, feels like that moment right before you black out. Those last three lines were a murder, made to look like an accident. this was killer.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Army Barbie (499) writes:
I didn't expect to read what I did. As Preacherdoll said...interesting.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Zhaal Nyet Telka (167) writes:
Wow, this was suprisingly good. And even more suprising, I understood it. Brava! ~Angel


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, Preacher X (60) writes:
An interesting peice, a tad hard for me to follow but that could be the lack of sleep there.


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, elisa (1995) writes:
slick ... with an arsenal of sexual condiments ......subsequent to a rigorous deliberation, of course. ...nicely done.



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