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"Gatekeepers Bribe" by Dancing_Monkey

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Let me trade you any coin in my pocket for whatever taste you got
Tie you up in these knots you made me master, scraped and left enraged
Drop you in the pond. Kissed here that night
Seems compelling, lies!
Attractive architecture but a boyscout; hardly!
Seeking, telling stories like I did not have my own
A surely non tolerant face posing
We both went to summercamp remember?
Cherished desire, I just dislike the idea of some dude loving the taste of cock


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On Sunday September 30th, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
wow, I like your style, great write!


On Thursday August 16th, 2007, An Expired Member (22) writes:
I suck at comments but I liked this so much! Made me think :)


On Sunday August 12th, 2007, carlosjackal (1555) writes:
Like I've DP-mailed you before, there's a sinister undertone to this piece and as much as clues are given in this piece there's still a wicked mystery to thw whole story opaquely hinted at. Excellent. -Carl


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
ha! Feels like you and the captain have been dancing too often together, and its all bribery, every moment is more of it - the actuality of changed positions, of the nature of enslavement - the lies are all that is true


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
But they're useful in the compulsion - building beautiful nothings - despite the fact that every boy is a boyscout: really? Campfires are still an important feature of even modern culture, we just don't tell as interesting tales


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
But I wish we'd all be able to sit around and hear Homer sung as it was sung, and Grimm coming to life with nothing but words - lies, but so beautiful as to be better than any truth


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
We each have our masks, and those memoir's of childlike abandon stay with you forever, nostalgia syndrome and desire become symbolic of another greater desire - the conclusion - oh the conclusion


On Monday August 6th, 2007, Solace (1434) writes:
Its a homage and a truth amongst lies - you get what you asked for - so is it worth paying or not? you might just have to taste it to be sure...


On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, sIo (901) writes:
chimp doggy i'm sowwy but i hafta say i don't get dis at all....i read it like three times though. i tried. but i do like, however, the fact that it is open to question. a straight forward write sometimes can just be cliche


On Thursday August 2nd, 2007, sIo (901) writes:
...this..this is fresh. hooray! good job :)


On Tuesday July 31st, 2007, An Expired Member (6) writes:
mysterious


On Saturday July 28th, 2007, Mab (1061) writes:
bartering for scraps of desire and disdain,disengage the raging soul of falseties ~jeezus...the ending threw me for a loop!


On Friday July 27th, 2007, silent circus (404) writes:
haha,,,love the title. the end is just........**giggles** good write. a lil freaky, sad, just........a lot going on


On Thursday July 26th, 2007, saintedmad (848) writes:
keymaster? this does have a coppery aftertaste; it feels nearly sarcastic with a twist of fate. .. almost like a parable of a prostitute of some sort, always coming back for more damage... .interesting


On Thursday July 26th, 2007, elisa (1930) writes:
made me feel like an overused coin.. dropped in a dirty Vegas slot.........your words reach out and violate every inch of my mind.......i love it.


On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:
wow I will come back when I have something deeper to say...but wow :}


On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, Rebell tiGer King (387) writes:
agrees with mike, this has headache written all over but i keep coming back to it, AWESOME monkey sir, nicely done -symph-


On Wednesday July 25th, 2007, Alanarchy (1627) writes:
This is so weird, and that's not criticism. I get the feeling there's an interesting story behind it. Either way, this got me thinking around it. Thanks, man. Nice work.


On Friday July 27th, 2007, Urban Shipwreck (1002) writes:
To be sure.



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