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reBoot by Liz
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reBoot

~ Liz ~

I think
.death.
is like f
............a
...............l
.................l
...................ing asleep
or
passing out.

some-Times I
[close]
my eyes
a second
and lose a
CHUNK
of Time.

.death.
is like that
(i think)

Like cut-
...............ting power
to a Computer
.forever.

then
Weather and Time
s c a t t e r
our parts
until they make up
other Computers.

may-be
some-day we'll
< plug >
old memories
into
new machines
and watch
ancient Files.

© 2006 Liz
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  • A former member wrote: hmm. It's an interesting idea. I'm not sure what I think about the concept, but I really like the piece.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, February 21, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (666) wrote:

    Great piece - the parallel to a computer made it a bit creepy for me, as it boiled us down to a very functional level...which left me feeling very "unspecial". Interesting thoughts. Ciao, T/S

  • Raven On Saturday, February 18, 2006, Raven (337) wrote:

    Oh... Yes. That is all I can say. You stole the words right out of my brain, and made them more eloquent than I could ever have hoped to accomplish.


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