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"Ohio Winter (Five Haiku)" by Liz

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Look! Casualties
Strewn about the autumn ground:
The leaves have fallen.



Bony clawed-hand trees
With blood-red berries beading
Like perspiration.



Valiant pine trees
Displaying lush summer green
On dead winter days.



Bone-cracking cold and
Flesh-shredding wind now torture
The smallest sparrow.



As our breath escapes--
A ghost in cold night air--it
Floats towards heaven.




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On Thursday November 1st, 2007, Mab (1019) writes:
these haiku are beautiful in their entirety as a single poem...the second one is my favorite.love it.


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, DarkPoet (226) writes:
I'm laughing from the start. Very good.


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:
You've really made exquisite imagery from a simple poetic form, the impact knocks away my breath.


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"Flesh-shredding wind now tortures" I like the shivering feelings portrayed: from the fallen leaves to the 'bone-cracking cold', how our breath escapes like ghosts. Inspiring modes of Japanese poetry; well done.


On Friday December 2nd, 2005, blue (1749) writes:
=) That was one damn fine collection of haiku!! ...and they all blended so perfectly together. Yay! for smiles. ~b



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