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I know coffee is unhealthy
and smoking’s risks are clear,
but some things are so enticing, like...
I can’t turn down free beer.

I know better than dating artists
as they are impossible to please,
but I’ve got a weakness for musicians-
drummers, especially.

There’s a problem with open ledges-
base jumping is too appealing
and I try to refrain from singing, as
my voice leaves others
reeling.

And sex...
Virginity was too tough.
But internet porn equates our sex to this mess
on the paint-smeared face of a bleached blonde doll,
who just can’t get enough.

What does it for me is the beauty
of naked bodies on the ground,
the ecstasy tingle I wish I was feeling,
the taunt pull of pleasure, driving each down.

And I've got this fierce weakness for babies,
the idea of joy
personified.
I envy the couples who have them, but dread
the idea of raising a child.

But my strongest weakness, by far, is love
in this world of reality-
like the fountain of youth,
enlightenment,
or the goddamn American dream-
I dive for the unattainable, and surface
with a mouth full of blasphemy.





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On Sunday December 4th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (396) writes:
Well put, Liz. You have a real grip on perspective and the conveyance (forgive my spelling i'm sleepy) of it. That line you end it with does such a great work true justice, though there were a couple other lines I liked just as much.


On Wednesday October 12th, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
*edited 10-12-05, after workshopping with a creative writing class


On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (546) writes:
when I read this the first time I didn't even notice that it rhymed reading it now it clearly does....personaly I liked it better befor but this is allso good


On Thursday November 3rd, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
It rhymed before. I took out the first stanza and reworded a few parts that people had trouble reading out loud. Thanks for reading it again.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (546) writes:
I love this for its honesty,its simplicity, its youthfulness, I love references to the American dream, I like these sort of halting prose because they make me stop and reflect as each point is made......you have a beautiful style


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, Just a Rose (33) writes:
very nice sounds alot like my weaknesses


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, elisa (1987) writes:
lol......wow.....i'm looking in a mirror, blasphemy and all...rock solid.


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, Revolting Theatre (36) writes:
a mouth full of blasphemy indeed. well wrote.


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, An Expired Member (47) writes:
very nice, beautiful, me likey



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