for all to see

An entire universe can hang
on the thread that holds you
suspended between sleep and wake,
in those seconds before it all breaks
and falls down on you.

A world that doesn't exist anymore
roused my naked flesh this morning,
so that the bleeding holes,
oozing my disease,
could be out for all to see.

• On Sunday, December 31, 2006, SamoneDrone (351) wrote:
  
  This I find to be a very thought-provoking poem. Poignant in its simplicity, but full of a message. ....-Samone
  
  
• On Sunday, December 4, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (333) wrote:
  
  Hey this is nifty. Brilliantly creative and powerful. I like this a lot because of how it made me really stop to think for a while. Good write! Heh, the whole thing is a good line, i can't pick just one.
  
  
• A former member wrote: Planet Earth is our Mother...
  
  
• On Wednesday, March 23, 2005, Soulfire (110) wrote:
  
  Chills....simple but powerful. love it!
  
  
• On Tuesday, March 22, 2005, Anth (1441) wrote:
  
  this is so refined,powerful, painfully real..just...damn,i know how you feel, im in awe of this poem...faves
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, Forgotten Angel (367) wrote:
  
  makin me think about how messed up the world is..and what we've done 2 help it along its destructive path..and i love this write..i think alot of us think the same, in different wording -Kel
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, Liz (341) wrote:
  
  Your comment puts me in awe of poetry's scope. Nowhere in my process did I think 'political [or] environmental statement.' But I'm glad I reached you.
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, BleedSilver (335) wrote:
  
  very painful and dark. This is quite a piece of works. Made me think!
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, Simply Me (46) wrote:
  
  Great writing here. "An entire universe can hang on the thread that holds you" ... Damn. I love that.
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, Sin (1412) wrote:
  
  impeccable as always...this was marvelous
  
  
• On Monday, March 21, 2005, sIo (797) wrote:
  
  woooo this is quite beautifully rendered in mutilation and agony of the mind. wonderful piece :)