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traffic blasts by with silent snowflakes
outside a coffee shop where the singer sucks

the joint is full
of young men and
old boys

there's poetry tomorrow
a day early
and always falling short

twanging guitar
croons through the night
Nirvana covers and Christmas punk
the best musicians are ugly

I wish I was high
as plaster paneled ceilings
I would float through the rooms
on the loneliness of the chords

speakers deliver to
so many empty couches
leather black or cream
like the died hair
on punk kids

their scuffed shoes drag
on cheap carpet

anything but another Kurt conformer
shut the hell up.
my frozen foot
your whiney ass.
wash your hair,
greaseball.

he cries on
and I think
if I were stoned I could love him.
and you.

fingers too cold
to hold a pen
I sip cappuccino like burnt wood



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On Monday April 4th, 2005, Loserland (134) writes:
i love this....great writing skills


On Thursday February 10th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
this takes me back


On Thursday January 20th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
*style brilliantly...its something,I find a bit like rhyme..generally,i'm not a huge fan of rhyme,but when I find somebdy who does it well...man.I hope i'm making sense..


On Thursday January 20th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
That last stanza is fucking great..'fingers too cold to hold a pen I sip cappuccino like burnt wood'..It's so simple,but..god..I wish I could tell you why I love that...I really like the way you've written it,if you ge what I mean?I think you work the sty


On Monday January 17th, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
wow, amazing. i love this............................................ -samone


On Monday January 17th, 2005, Six-Out (1823) writes:
I've had this open many times, but never read it. Now I realized i was missing out. Great write, Liz.


On Monday January 17th, 2005, fucken_ke_ke (8) writes:
"and I think if I were stoned I could love him." i love this line.


On Sunday January 9th, 2005, Cinn (188) writes:
Reading this it makes you feel like you're really there. "the joint is full of young men and old boys," i love that line. Awesome write. -Cinn


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Northstar (455) writes:
this is such a vivid piece--you really make this real for me--and I love the ending


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
i wouldnt normally like a poem like this,but the way youve written it makes it a brilliant read,theres an originality and style to it,and the descriptions and pace where excellent


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Revolting Theatre (37) writes:
Good Write Liz - josh


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:
excellent, very effective sensory conveying here; lovely observances very well put across. Great piece. And LOL at the Kurt conformer stanza. >:)


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, slow.burn.star (97) writes:
fuck, yes.


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
i love the descriptiveness of this poem. i definately sounds like a coffee shop poem but much better than what im used to. very nice write.


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, frozen (748) writes:
this was great


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, physicalgraffiti (64) writes:
wow...this is amazingly beautiful. i'm in awe. thank you so much for sharing this...in fact *favs*


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, AniDayz (1281) writes:
damn girl...you're -a*maz*ing- this is wonderful and witty...the poetry ...the title...the descriptiveness...the intelligence...it all flows so beautifully together.


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, Astra Dei (644) writes:
not bad stuff. i know what you mean. seems like the world has been taken over by people conforming to anti-conformanism


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, A Broken Soul (103) writes:
it took me a while to get the title... good poem... it's almost like a story, very vivid. oh, and fyi, i am a whiny punk-child who loves nirvana. hehe. ^Autumn^



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