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"I Demand" by Liz

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silly Eve
disobedient Eve
setting the stage
for the rest
of us

the corsets
the weaving
that nervous
"disorder"
lie down
close your eyes, and keep
still

obey thy husband
give birth to his god
or abort
thy purpose

no priests
no presidents inside, the
smiling wives of
painted perfection.
cooking and birthing
simple and sweet
skirt and heels

dumb blonde
tight sweater
ass to tap
woman driver
sweet-talk me
naked.
please

stupid bitches
the feminists
lesbians in
leotards-unisex
wanting
he/she/it
like castration

shut up
lie down
keep still

love the flattery
in protection
gentle hands
of pedestals
knowing
what is best

step off and fall
forever
dark folds
pulsing senselessly
vote
wear pants
how much more
could you
possibly
stomp that
pretty little
foot
and demand




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On Sunday December 4th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:
ouch. point made, i feel sorry for those who miss it! you're just good at that, Liz. Glad I ran into your stuff. You're so feisty.


On Friday August 26th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (473) writes:
yeah... this is pretty good... but if this is as bitchy as you get then you got a way to go yet...


On Monday January 3rd, 2005, anth (1612) writes:
the way this is written is so stylish,really well thought out piece, with pace and rythm


On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:
*grins* this is quite good, a lighter sarcasm, it seems more relaxed than the usual angered outbursts I see so often...I like calm things...


On Tuesday November 23rd, 2004, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
I agree with purr and Mr King.....allso the seething sarcasm gave me quite a chuckle


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Liz (407) writes:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.


On Sunday November 21st, 2004, elisa (2036) writes:
a good Demand can be a beautiful thing:) elisa


On Sunday November 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (53) writes:
could be better?..never..great translation for the reality well done Liz..thanks Imad


On Wednesday November 17th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
This write is infatuating . . addictive; the temptation and fierceness laced with a fearsome essence . . utterly demanding.


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
fantastic ending! dripping with power in a very clever way indeed. great write.


On Monday November 15th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:
an amazing expression the silent rage of womankind... the repression... the inhumanity... the male oppression... the objectification... you should demand... Goddess bless you for it... 1, Seth


On Monday November 15th, 2004, indefined (716) writes:
intruiging if anything. not a bad write at all.


On Monday November 15th, 2004, AlluringDescent_darkbride (765) writes:
Oh, I love it. It's something I talk about frequently. "shut up/lie down/keep still" Oh...i just don't know what to say.



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