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"the old in and out"

in and out
in and out

the waves roll in
and carry out

in and out
in and out

a life of sin
to laugh about

in and out
in and out

rejoice in skin
admonish doubt

in and out
in and out

the bodies win
when soul blacks out

"Amen. And all that cal."
A Clockwork Orange

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On Thursday December 16th, 2004, frozen (748) writes:

awesome write

On Monday November 15th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

a silent piercing scream at the top of your lungs... powerful... horrific... Nice work.

On Sunday November 14th, 2004, indefined (716) writes:

nice little ditty. each little section made me pause to fully think. good stuff.

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

..''Amen.And all that cal.''...I love that quote at the end...I think it rounds off the poem just as well as it finishes off the book :)

On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Liz (407) writes:

I don't know if I'd go that far. I really love the quote though, and I just had to use it.

On Friday November 12th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:

I love a clockwork orange...i'm reading the book at the moment and was considering doing a piece based on it myself....but,well..now i've seen this,heh....nice work :)

On Friday November 12th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

perfect in so many ways

On Friday November 12th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

perfection

On Friday November 12th, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...always loved reading stuff by you...this is no different...yet again amazed by the perfect rhythm (no pun intended) -Darun

On Friday November 12th, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...and I'm in no position to yell about you being slow on writes...I'm even slower, lol...

On Friday November 12th, 2004, Angst Queen (471) writes:

yea darun you are slow :p

On Friday November 12th, 2004, Liz (407) writes:

the only thing I've been slower with is payment.

On Friday November 12th, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...I would so help out in that if I weren't this darn broke right now...

On Friday November 12th, 2004, Liz (407) writes:

That's sweet but don't worry about it. I paid my $10 2 days ago, so you're stuck with me for another year.

On Friday November 12th, 2004, SilentStalker (1360) writes:

...darn, that sucks... :)

On Friday November 12th, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:

lovely little powerful piece; excellently and skilfully expressed.

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