beautiful impressions of longing running against the grain of necessity, pictures of the rulers of the world within the self

Wow, this was quite the enchanting write."I strain to catch a tune. hidden music so beautiful and the ripples of a sigh." with an awesome title, incredible wording...and such a sweet closing line. how could this not be anything less than a great write?

*stomach its full'...at this exact moment in time,thats precisely what I feel i'm doing...and,the whole second stanza...just wonderful.....this is really really great work!

Why doesn't this poem have more comments?!...It always bugs me,when I find work like this,that appears to have been read so little...when I feel like it should be read ny everyone.Right now,I love this piece..'chewing mouthfuls of dirt to convince my stom

Well then. This is impressive.. how did you get your goats to write like this? hmm, lemmie go look at a couple more of these. Nice. [D&A]

Wow... Nice! I Like it... ~Daegonna~

wow...this is deep and delightful~ss