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Implosion Sickness

Oh it hurts
over and over
hydrogen, oxygen, water
denial, struggle, promise
(implosion)
love, death, pain.
I don't want
to hurt
anymore

I don't want
to love
anymore.
Something's wrong
wicked, warped, sick
a dance of frenzy
I will
stumble through
until the day
I fall

a dance of passion
I once embraced
and mastered.
Now all is rot
all for naught
and over and over
it hurts.

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On Saturday November 20th, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

"a dance of passion I once embraced and mastered." very nice...there is so much to quote in this. it just seethes beauty. awesome write liz.

On Friday May 14th, 2004, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

HRm . I am enjoying your writting technique' .. reminds me of, or at least is, similiar to slow.burn.star's .. i would say there are about a handful of poets on this site who write in this degree.. Excellent tYpE. :[D&A]

On Thursday October 30th, 2003, An Expired Member (39) writes:

Love seems to leave everyone feeling like this. I guess that's why I refuse it all the time.... good job :)

On Sunday October 26th, 2003, HeLlSeND (58) writes:

as it will till you forget....or at least cover it with something else.....and then for some strange reason...as bakkhus said....you do it all over again

On Tuesday October 14th, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:

Hah, indeed you did..Good write and your name is subtle to the piece..-Kefka

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, OLd SouL (833) writes:

ouch, want a hug?

On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:

"and over and over it hurts" Love is never truely over, it only gets run over by trains. I've laid on many tracks, still, I'll buy another ticket. There's always one for sale; somewhere(?)

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:

the more i pay attention the more i realise how wonderful of a poet you are, i dont like to comment on personal things so i'll end with, i like it.

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Loserland (134) writes:

hey i kinda feel this way right now. Great title, i have one called Emotion Sickness and the poem itself is really good

On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Liz (401) writes:

Yeah, I ripped the title off of Silverchair's song "Emotion Sickness," actually. Thank you.

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