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There certaintly are a lot of important people walking around campus. Walking briskly. That's the way to walk when you're wearing a suit or heels for the benefit of convincing others that you are important. Strolling while wearing a suit makes you look like the president. He doesn't have to be brisk; everyone knows he's important. (The US president, that is. The university president has to walk that way because he's too short to otherwise keep up with people. That, and I think he's got tireless energy and is simply BRISK! by nature.

I've also noticed that putting your hands in your pants pockets while wearing a buttoned suit jacket makes you look like a lazy and/or pompus jackass, and makes me think of the word "congressman." Don't wear a suit unless you're going to be doing something important.

It really is nice to have all these busy, important people walking brisk!ly by while I lay barefoot in the grass. Makes me feel like a dirty hippy. I wish I had a guitar to play for them. I could make up songs that didn't rhyme, about what the chloroflorocarbons of their hairspray bottles are doing to "our" ozone layer. Maybe I could ask them who owns the moon.

Because I like to think I do.



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On Monday July 23rd, 2007, AHHH (243) writes:
haha.


On Friday February 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (10) writes:
sorry nothing


On Friday January 7th, 2005, Rone4611 (157) writes:
*smiles* i'd be sittin there with ya... dirty hippys, very good. I'll play the guitar.


On Monday November 22nd, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
ahh! like so many before me, the end made me smile. I also like the duality of the hippy image vs the suit brigade and the perceived ownerships, et al... but you own the moon... (I don't think I've expressed that particularly well. Sorry about that.) At a


On Monday November 22nd, 2004, purr_verse (1437) writes:
At any rate, I really enjoyed this write.


On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
*sighs*...ah..I love the mood this piece has put me in...thank you :)


On Saturday November 13th, 2004, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
'Maybe I could ask them who owns the moon.'..that line really made me smile.I too,love the image of you lying barefoot on the grass,sort of...watching the world pass by..watching everybody go about thier ways..


On Wednesday December 3rd, 2003, Drifter (359) writes:
A hippy after my own heart. lol. If you go and visit your moon soon, stear clear of my "L-A-Z-E-R".


On Thursday October 2nd, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"Maybe I could ask them who owns the moon." You have my undivided vote! Love the image of barefoot in the lawn, I'll play my guitar for you...


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Bast (896) writes:
this is awesome. musings written when relaxing, watching the world go by... always seem more philosophical to me.


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, Loserland (134) writes:
it makes me smile the last paragraph is a delight


On Wednesday October 1st, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:
haha love it, especially the ending. I think you'd make a wonderful hippy.


On Saturday September 27th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
wear a suit if you feel like it...who is to say what someone wears and how important you must be to adorn wares..do what makes you feel great and fuck everyone elses opinions..


On Friday September 26th, 2003, Mauler (6) writes:
People with their hands in thier pockets are usually insecure, maybe that's why they're wearing suits too.


On Friday September 26th, 2003, Aurora_Light (573) writes:
*big grin and its not leaving* great job u did something noone has done ina bit put a smile on my face that hasnt left yet and i think it feels good to smile i love the way u make everyone seem even urself, great great job


On Friday September 26th, 2003, SilentStalker (1324) writes:
I love it! You've got a way with words here; I'm visualizing everything as you tell it. Truly remarkable... -Darun


On Thursday September 25th, 2003, angelunderneath (75) writes:
Love that last line! How wonderful to lay with your feet in the grass while others are rushing around passing everything that is good by!


On Thursday September 25th, 2003, boughtwithblood (296) writes:
hahahaaa, great last line [but i must disagree... I OWN THE MOON]



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