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This is my prison
Cold, hard, stone walls
Enclosing me in darkness
Chains rip through my skin
As i try to pull away
This is my prison
Surrounding me everyday
As my captor watches
Reveling in my torment
All i can do is cry
This is my prison



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On Thursday May 10th, 2007, wilted (306) writes:
I think we all have our own prisons... We all just need to find a way to break free from the chains.


On Wednesday September 3rd, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1761) writes:
its good, but yes delete the explanation or put it in last.. Monkey


On Wednesday August 27th, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (180) writes:
Short And To The Point. Great Write... I Think It Is Safe To Delete The Explaination Just Before The Poem. Don't Hate Me. GPhD.


On Friday August 29th, 2003, SalemLex (42) writes:
Dont worry i dont hate you. I dont hate anybody (no point in it). Thanx


On Monday August 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:
it is short, but it has enough content and emotion in it to make me understand. i like it. good job.


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
very nice I to have a prison, but mine is quiet different................O.


On Friday August 22nd, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
a concise and most profound reflection of place and time; when i write like this, its as if im writing in a journal,to some a vauge refrance to me a complete memory .....with despair to taste upon.....well done urban



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