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I can see it now
A vision, premonition or dream
Whatever you want to call it
My mind in a whirl
Confusion among my thoughts
My mind and heart are falling apart
With my mind so occupied its too late
I finally see four bright lights
They shine right on me, two on each side
I see that my heart will be free
I see my last sight
Take a deep breath
The thoughts run out of my mind
The end is so close


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On Thursday January 8th, 2004, Methos (154) writes:
interesting and magnificent work...your poetry knows no bounds, and has neverending depth...Simply wonderful...-Methos


On Monday November 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (39) writes:
I guess it wouldn't matter if I was in this state of mind, but gettin hit by two cars at once would suck. Talk about a mess.... Anyway, this was cool.


On Thursday August 21st, 2003, Deliverence (797) writes:
Years? thats a hell of a lot longer than i've been writing...You've come a long way..-Kefka


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:
i cant believe it.....your not new at this are you, cuz if you are....you is a great begginer...


On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, SalemLex (42) writes:
no i'm not a beginner, i've been writing for years now but most up here are old ones.


On Thursday August 14th, 2003, morgue_white (195) writes:
are you getting hit by two cars at once? hehe.


On Friday August 15th, 2003, SalemLex (42) writes:
yeah that was supposed to be the jist of it.


On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
just letting you know that your work has depth......urban


On Friday July 25th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
a quick retreat into emotion....section #5 row #10 line 15A..............beautiful....urban


On Friday August 15th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:
I', lost too! But i think this is a great piece and u better keep writing!...lol


On Tuesday August 5th, 2003, SalemLex (42) writes:
Sorry maybe i'm a idiot but whats with the section #5 row #10 line 15A.


On Friday July 25th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:
What ^^ he said.



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