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"Ode to a Brick Wall" by finaldestiny

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So symmetrically placed.
The cement bricks
climb up the wall.
Entwining each other.
Never to find a bent line
or crushed brick.
Perfection at it’s best.
They encase us within a room,
trapping us within.
Counting each brick at least kills time.
Hell, it’s better than listening to the teacher.



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On Monday August 13th, 2007, What Limes (170) writes:
damn. Skepticism didn't pay off on that one! Great stuff from something so medial!


On Thursday September 15th, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:
hehe so true, so true. very nice.


On Friday June 3rd, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
"THEY encase us"? Otherwise, very clever.



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