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im standing right before your eyes
naked
my feelings and soul open to you
with nothing to
hide
the chassis within has been broken
free
take a look at me
and discover
i
am
me
hate me because I live the life
you aspire
although my mind may
conform
my heart and soul will not
I stand before you
naked
my essence is
bleeding
with emotion
that you cannot perceive
my wound is getting
deeper
and my pain more evident
tears
of blood run down
I grab a tissue
but blood continues
my hearts stops
to realize
you dont care
at least I
tried
but I must leave
to find another who will
undress
me.



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On Friday June 16th, 2006, kiss of the dark (42) writes:
you wear your heart on your sleeve...a spiritual and religious unwrapping of your feelings and emotions...so sad


On Monday March 29th, 2004, Tracer (140) writes:
Different take on not being cared for by someone whom you loved but did not return that feeling, "my essence is bleeding", great imagery...^vTracerv^


On Monday March 29th, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (603) writes:
well put, i hope you find someone worthy to undress you



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