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Another stupid suicide poem

Look at me! Look at me!
im rambling on and on
something about suicide and death
it has to be a turn on

hell this is darkpoetry
shouldn't it be this way?
everything needs to have blood and guts
and about not being here the next day

hey believe it or not
im trying to show a point
suicide doesnt grab attention
nor does lighting up a joint

so please please
just stop while your ahead
im quite sick of this
god you're hurting my head!!!

im sorry if i offend you
with this stupid poem
but im tired of reading this stuff
please go to the doctors and show em

i thank you for your time
and letting me express myself
im packing my bags up
and putting this one back on the shelf

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On Saturday November 1st, 2008, The Spiral Downward (387) writes:

I couldn't agree more. But the apologetic nature of the words can cause this to not be taken as seriously as it SHOULD. I've always respected such poems as this, but with more of a cold hearted nature and tone. If people cannot handle truth, fuck them. However I still say that I agree with this WHOLE-HEARTEDLY. Write On Sir.

On Friday April 30th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

ok....well i've already stated my opinion no need to say it again and again..iim bascially on the same wavelength as six. This is my opinion....take it or leave it. i've tried to commit suicide, i've been there and im just preaching my opinon after having

On Friday April 30th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

close friends commit suicide. im not trying to make you think the way I do.....just trying to get my voice heard. ~Finaldestiny~

On Friday April 30th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:

Problem is, the attention seekers aren't the only ones who will read it. But honestly, everyone...don't give this one poem too much credit. For a serious suicidal person, one poem is not going to make or break their will.

On Friday April 30th, 2004, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:

ironic part is, that writing about the suicidal feelings "can" provide and "does" on many instances provide a coping mechanism that prevents thought from becoming action. I don't approve of this poem at all...but it was well written.

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

to herslef, and actually doing it..

On Friday April 30th, 2004, Six-Out (1799) writes:

What about those who don't want to read them? You say to turn the other cheek, why can't you do the same here? I think everyone is entitled to their opinion. If people can write about suicide, we can write against it.

On Friday April 30th, 2004, cre (507) writes:

One small difference is that generally, suicide poems are written expressing a person's feelings - NOT attacking someone else. This type of poem, on the other hand, is written for the express purpose of making fun of / belittling / attacking someone.

On Friday April 30th, 2004, Six-Out (1799) writes:

But it's still expressing their feelings. If this poem offends people, well guess what? Suicide poetry offends me. It's not going to stop, so why do people get all riled up about this?

On Thursday April 29th, 2004, Beautiful Scars (245) writes:

Fuck this honestly, if people want to write about death, then let them, they can do whatever the fuck they want, and you dont have to read it if you dont like, I would much rather have my sister show mw her poems about death and cutting then keeping them

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

correct me if i'm wrong but people write how they feel and i'd much rather read someone's suicide note on dp than their obituary in the newspaper..it's your choice to read them or not.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

and another thing...bandwagons suck ass...you have people writing about suicides for one reason or another and then you have people writing about the people who write about suicide...both can be equally annoying.

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

but one is spawned from a feeling of despair (or to get attention) and the other is mocking that feeling..almost tempting the writer to go ahead and do it...how heartless can you get?

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

ok ya know what fuck you thats all i gotta say number one i've been there and tried to commit suicide twice. number two this poem is to all those dumbass people who do this shit for attention. and if they are doing it for attention then they deserve to di

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

*continued* die.number three for those people who are serious, maybe they should stop writing about it and bitching about it and get help instead. everyone has there own problems here and we dont need people begging for attention, we are willing to help y

On Wednesday March 24th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (311) writes:

they deserve to die...thank you for proving my point. cheers.

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

*Continued* that don't say a thing about it we should worry about!" probably what im trying to convey to you in this simple sentence. ~finaldestiny~

On Monday March 22nd, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

*continued again* you if you want the help. Also No Exit go and read Rebal_Angel's comment on this piece wait i'll save you the trouble.."haha...this is kinda funny. They always say the people that talk about commiting suicide never do it is the ones that

On Sunday March 21st, 2004, Twilight (2084) writes:

sad poetry bites....

On Wednesday November 12th, 2003, Storm (184) writes:

Firts thing:You do have a point, a very good one. And at that It's a great laugh (in a good way, of course!) Though... people who write about "Dark" stuff often write about it to get it all OUT of the system. Anuways, great work. /Storm -Who writes abou

On Monday August 11th, 2003, Abbyernathie (68) writes:

this is so true. i'm getting soooo sick of all this talk about suicide. it's like it's a fad or something...great write! it made me laugh

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Kittichoo (44) writes:

Good point... there's more to darkness than death... life is the bleakest it gets. I'd like to find more poetry on here about other things. That and it is a good laugh. :D

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

Finally, someone is jumping on the bandwagon. Maybe people will listen to you, because they don't listen to me.

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, finaldestiny (98) writes:

i love u six dont worry i value ur opinion

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Spikes_of_Blue (50) writes:

i like this...although most of my stuff is sad and i used to wanna kill myself it makes me laugh...haha good one...

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:

lol this is great...its true too many "no one loves me so i'll tell how im going to kill myself" poems...lol oh and i agree with rebel on the quite ones...

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, Rebel_Angel (401) writes:

haha...this is kinda funny. They always say the people that talk about commiting suicide never do it is the ones that don't say a thing about it we should worry about!

On Wednesday August 6th, 2003, An Expired Member (1) writes:

i found this a rather interesting poem. I enjoyed the honesty of it....AweInspired

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