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The light shimmers,
clenching the sparkle in your eyes.
Like a star in the night,
it's a treasure to me.

Your smile inwraps my heart,
leaving me breathless.
I can't help myself,
as if I am lifeless.

I caress the time endlessly,
wanting and hopeing for it to be eternity.
But it must come to an end,
for anything this good cannot last.

A gentle stroke can withhold my heart,
but don't be decieved and shiver it out.
A gaze from an eye shows meaning,
but words can be hidden and not be heard.

It's a feeling of strength and life,
that no words could embrace.
So it must dwell within our soul,
until the shackles can be realesed.

But once this feeling is released,
it cannot be controlled.
Although my heart feels relieved of the pressure,
it's hopes and dreams have not been fulfilled.

Until that time when our eyes meet,
and my heart is free,
I will accept my destiny,
until at last my dream is alive.



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On Sunday August 8th, 2004, Twilight (2102) writes:
very hopeful. this is what i have been looking for. something uplifting. something to make me think there is some truth when someone speaks "tomorrow is a new day". i believe it. thank you.


On Wednesday July 30th, 2003, Delilah (132) writes:
Loved this...this was great!! If I was able to have favorites right now, you would be on my list... ~Delilah~


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Rebel_Angel (402) writes:
I like it. Everyone lately is writing about things taht are only dreams... But they are great! Keep it up


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (20) writes:
absolutely wonderful. I love it. Hang on, I have to go read it again... yep, still love it.


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:
~*~crying~*~


On Tuesday July 22nd, 2003, Nomad (49) writes:
Excellent write. I esp like your references to the imprisonment/release of the creative impetus- at least that's what it is to me("it must dwell...released" and "But once this feeling...fulfilled"). Again, good job.



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