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Drip

the blood trickles down
blinding to our eyes
it captivates our essence
leaving us staring for eternity

slowly as we watch
the blood slipts
like a flowing river
the majoirty continues

part of the river
drips down to earth
where it will dwell
till it shrivels up and dies

the drip cut off from the rest
leaving nowhere to go
alone is now the destiny
forever shall it remain

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On Saturday August 16th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

you make beautiful pieces of work...I specially love the simplicity and elegancy of this one...nicely done.

On Monday August 4th, 2003, Twilight (2084) writes:

very good...i will definately read more of you work

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, DoctorAsh (503) writes:

Bea-ut-if-file wright. Teak and amber. Heavy. Awsome read. [D&A]

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

awesome write, the essence of life brought to breath in a few stanzas... very well done...~Velvet~

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, blackdarkness (309) writes:

I like it...well done...I also love blood....hehe

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