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"disorderly- asylum door #13" by anathema

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cure
:noun
 from Medieval Latin cura, cure of souls, from Latin, care
 
1a : recovery or relief from a disease b : something (as a drug or treatment) that cures a disease c : a course or period of treatment
2 : a complete or permanent solution or remedy
3 : a process or method of curing.

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i sighed
and opened my hand
and took their pills
so they would let me out of here

and it's true
what they said

all the craziness
went away

and that's good
i suppose....

but
everything else went too
out the window
i'm numb
completely
numb

who would've thought
such sweet looking
innocent
easter colored pills
would be
such powerful
drugs?

i see
nothing
and i hear
nothing
and i do
nothing
and i feel
nothing

and i'd say
that i'm ok with that
if i even felt
ok

but
i don't
i feel like a machine
i go through the motions
of humanity
and i'd be jealous
of they way they cry
and laugh
and rage
if i wasn't so damn apathetic

i sighed
and opened my hand
and took their pills
but when they let me out of there

i
think

they put me in a far worse asylum

the padded
room
of being
a
walking
breathing
semi-living
void




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On Saturday August 20th, 2005, Last1inLine (18) writes:
This is the most powerful series of work I've come across here. Thank you.


On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:
your words echo everything I have ever been told about this type of thing... a cure it is not, but merely a dulling of everything. Fox


On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, SilentStalker (1316) writes:
You're a master of the mind. Have you ever tried convincing someone they're crazy? I think you could...


On Sunday August 10th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:
you are amazingly beautiful... i'm glad you feel... cause if you couldn't reciprocate the feelings i have for you i'd be a sad sad boy


On Friday July 11th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
"i feel like a machine i go through the motions" perfectly spliced philosphy Maybe i started at the wrong end, but often i do, and now my mouth is wet enuff to continue thru yur asylum


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
I read them, this is so wonderful explaining the way through each stage, you are a true poetic genius. Thank you for leading me through your life......O.


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:
too bad you ended the series.... I would've loved to read more


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
By your words i can tell of your intelligence, with that and internal wisdom you will find your self; your own path at your own pace..............urban


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
speaking from experience, the pills are good to get u out of the "rutt" this numb feeling, is leveling the playing field, whithout the hysteria,despondancy, one can slowly start to focus,though somtimes you e;ven miss the depression, the mood you know,


On Saturday August 9th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:
i think i agree with what urban is saying, and i do believe in an inbetween, because i think i'm living it, not in perfect balance, but a better one than what was, and i hope that others can achieve this too, but besides I love the series ~Dawn


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:
Apathy, love. I lived in apathy... it's the cure for depressions where you're over emotional... there's gotta be an in-between.


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, anathema (62) writes:
and the final piece- is it better to be mad, or numb? is there an inbetween? which is worse... the asylum they place your body it, or the one in which they trap your soul?...


On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:
this is an incredible closer to an amazing series of poems. :salutes:



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