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disorderly- asylum door #2

psych*as*the*nia

(noun)

: a neurotic state characterized esp. by phobias, obsessions, or compulsions that one knows are irrational

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they
say
i'm
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
but i'm not
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
perhaps it's
excessive
excessive
excessive
excessive
i think it's
expressive
expressive
expressive
expressive
and quite
impressive
impressive
impressive
impressive
if slightly
oppressive
oppressive
oppressive
oppressive
they
say
i'm
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
but i'm not
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive
obsessive

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On Wednesday March 10th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:

damn. speechless. this is SO good. Am moving to door #3... Fox

On Tuesday September 16th, 2003, SilentStalker (1316) writes:

....on to door# 3, I'm hooked...

On Saturday July 26th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

I like that one

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, Jonas (877) writes:

your charactarizations of these disorders is quite livable... plays like an empty drive in movie ampitheatre, crackling sound as the speakers turn on and arcan scenes play

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, IceDragoness (250) writes:

there's something eerily cute about this one ~Dawn

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, Six-Out (1799) writes:

Indeed, very creative. Bravo.

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:

whoa..crativity...havent seen that around these parts since... **explodes**

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, Nightingale (555) writes:

I second Nemo's comments and want to mention I feel ya!

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

This was a fun piece for me. I like how the colors actually worked subtly with the piece. Too many people here use colors too profoundly.

On Tuesday July 8th, 2003, anathema (62) writes:

This poem is about obsessive compulsive disorder... amusingly enough, though this poem is in fours... i always did things in threes... ah well.

On Wednesday July 9th, 2003, boughtwithblood (293) writes:

minx, this was very good. i fought OCD for years and finally beat it... well well done.

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