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The rain was there
to cleanse me
of sin's
not sorry for.

The air of uncertainty
fills up my lungs
and brings a tightness
to my chest.
I'm finding it hard to
b r e a t h

The rain was there
to add to
my tears -
streaking down my face -
escaping me.

A stiffness settles
in my joints
and makes it hard to move.
My muscles all are
flexed
awaiting that car crash
that never comes.

The rain was there
all around,
my pain nailed
to a bloodied post.
I am a monument
of exuberance
and filth.
Following the example
of all before.

The rain was there.
So much rain.
Cleanse me of sins
not worth dying for.
Cleanse me of my sins.






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On Wednesday January 17th, 2007, CharlottesWeb (623) writes:
This realy is gorgeous. It breaths, and you can feel the author through the words...


On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, WinterGrave (337) writes:
enjoyed the read, nice to read more of your work.~~~Grave


On Monday April 26th, 2004, flying_fox (764) writes:
This piece is so heartfelt... every words sounds like it was born from the deepest part of your soul. You sound tortured, and my heart goes out to you. *huuuuuuuugs*


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, girlafraid (577) writes:
i absolutely love this...the more i read it the more i like...there's so much emotion...thanks, man...*afraid*


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:
just points ut that nothing is accidental ... whether its rain or whatever ... it is serving some purpose to someone , somewhere ... along with just another


On Saturday April 17th, 2004, capt_funguy (992) writes:
everyday semi crucifixion ... we are trapped in a cycle of fucked symbolism .. stretching for absolution , yet just getting soaked ... loved it man ... glad to read a new one of yours ... funguy


On Tuesday January 4th, 2005, Nadir (615) writes:
Ill just leave my comment behind the captains. And also add that its interesting to compare your old work with the new ... Tiger


On Friday April 16th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
These is so sad and raw, I loved it. The rain cleansing, I love that notion. Very nice write. ~L



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