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~*~ Fly With Me~*~

the tread now threadbare
withered......defeated..
must i go again?
damn these illusions

full of doubt and low fortune
casted and bereaved
fly with me...
distant....that look in my eyes

am i speaking clearly
consice....sharp...
i wish i could pin point
when that last spark faded..

when did the thrill of touch
silken..gossamer
exit stage left
left behind on the thumb of a glove..
..

upon what scattered dream
sorrowful.....restrained...
whose possesive slumber
stirs this silent war..

ever onward...nowhere to hide
dance........exposed
among the living..
dissected blankets of peace

just when did my aura abate.....fade...?
botch....defile..
once a brilliant pane
fires left unstoked.....simply .....died...

liquidated..i remain
matte side of the coin
abandoned upon a dusted tabletop
forgotten....erased....relinquished

Distant-- that look in my eyes..
must i go again?

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On Sunday March 27th, 2005, Dr Benway (45) writes:

I agree with everything said so far, this painted a such a harsh picture. I am going to read some of your other work. So far everything I have read is amazing

On Sunday March 27th, 2005, frozen (748) writes:

everything you write puts me an awe this was incredible.

On Sunday March 27th, 2005, blue (1749) writes:

oooh..*shivers* Outstanding use of words and descriptions, altogether magnificent! I can't say enough good things about this write...the way you placed it all together was just so perfect... ****4stars ~b

On Sunday March 27th, 2005, K_Love (691) writes:

"i wish i could pin point when that last spark faded.." -- some really amazing lines in this piece. Breathtaking, indeed. Lovely decriptions.

On Saturday March 26th, 2005, darkdesires (175) writes:

So sad yet so beautiful. Breath taking. -trowasrevolution

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