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~~~***taunt~~~taste~~~kiss***~~~

Sing to me of honey
sing to me of rain
sing to me of passion
sing to me of pain

...............weave in me a fineness
...............none to match or trade
...............weave in me a vision
...............a hue to ne'er fade

speak to me of silence
speak to me of loss
speak to me of failure
speak to me of cost

...............paint in me a picture
...............framed in velvet fair
...............paint me on a canvas
...............my flesh soft and bare

taste me on a tuesday
taste me in the night
taste me on a platter
taste me without sight

...............render me a soverign
...............bathed a scarlet dark
...............render me a pupil
...............my soul a muted lark

free in me a boundary
free in me a stone
free in me a soltice
free in me this moan

...............taunt me in the winter
...............when spring in sleepy rest
...............taunt me in the moonlight
...............just underneath my breast

hush in me this longing
hush in me this hiss
hush in me this craving
hush me with a kiss..

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On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Ainsof (1872) writes:

mmmm mmmm this is tasty shweet! For so much rhyme, it really does not overwhelm, the obtuse choice of words and capture of seductive sentiment seems to carry through... such form, such structure and yet still somehow boundless and reaching eternal... the

On Tuesday April 10th, 2007, Ainsof (1872) writes:

slight change in the last line is very nice parting touch....

On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

Amazing, positively amazing. Your writing captivated me and drew me deeper into its message; gentle at the beginning, bittersweet and lustful towards the end. Magnificent.

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:

Damn....this is hot writing!

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (497) writes:

damn this is hot! i love it!!! *faves* ~sex~

On Thursday August 19th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

Rolls off my tongue very easily. Would make a good song.

On Wednesday August 18th, 2004, Marek (145) writes:

Simple. Nice. no twists or turns here, closed the way one would predict, and in fact would be disappointed to be wrong in this case. I enjoyed it. :)

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, manywalks (950) writes:

Dearheart, wow, this was enchanting, such a touch. ~ wen

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:

Duchess, you always leave us overwhelmed with your perfect sense and complete hold on passion, down on our knees, aroused once again...forgive me, but I must indulge in your poetry once more...it's human nature and my duty as a fan.

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, Wish Upon A Star (385) writes:

Stunning, perfect weaving rhyming it all fits together so beautifully. Such wonderfully effective words. Favourite. ~Wish Upon A Star

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, NikesRain (1429) writes:

thoughly decadent and lucious...excellent

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:

another wonderful piece Vel. =bows on the way out=

On Sunday August 15th, 2004, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

mmm yummy....you never cease to amaze and excite me vel ~hugs~...

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