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"I....{submersion}" by A Velvet Tongue

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I may not win
But I try..
I may not soar
But I fly..
I may not lose
But I'll die
I may not scream
But I cry
I may not find
But I hope
I may not speak
But I choke


I may not wait
But I want
I may not kill
But I hunt
I may not seek
But I stay
I may not believe
but I pray
I may not kneel
But I bow
I may not score
But I foul

I may not love
But I care
I may not smile
But I dare
I may not offer
But I accept
I may not lead
But I'm adept
I may not confess
But I sin

I may not play....
.....But I'll win..





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On Saturday June 24th, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (54) writes:
*stands in awe* what can i say? this was perfect


On Thursday September 16th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:
excellent..from beginning to end. didn't know what was coming next...got a contact buzz off your confidence. now i shall take over the world. ///Jedi\\\


On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:
I really like this piece...it's lovely and ended with perfection...the title summed it up perfectly.


On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:
This is one of the best poems i've read it the longest time!!! Great job!! Its so meaningful and so deep. I could see you as a pro!!


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
i like this...its beautiful ~ss


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
ooo i liked this little piece. very nice...i like how you are true to yourself with every line. revealing the good and the bad. awesome vel...wow.


On Sunday March 27th, 2005, A Velvet Tongue (529) writes:
thank you...without honesty..what do we truly have?..sinking deep within..that is where we find ourselves..*muah*


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:
i really like the way its written, full of positiveness and hope and so full of life(like you)..great work


On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, BleedSilver (373) writes:
What if I win? What will you do then? I may not play the game, But I ALWAYS win. lol. Great one. I like the sureness of the poem. ~Mikey



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