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On The Cusp of Truth...(with Jedi_Mind Fuck)

thoughts stealthily slip
through cordoned lips
upon ripened hips
they tarry...

wanderlust perplexed
sync into step
sink into ears
and bury

wrongs written right
out of spite
for rights written wrong
how long must we
joust and parry

road blocks we pass
upon the cumbersome curve
kissing you deep
upon drops of pain
on eyelids..carry

verily
i speak
as my thoughts
grow weary
my pretence
a sentence
aloft
and merry

carefully, tend mundane seeds
return my dreams
a look to capture
a dozen hello's
golden and savory

words...uncouth
on the cusp of truth
proof
that like minds
can
remain aloof

Find me in darkness
tainted and tumultuous
two burrowed worms
weaving silkened scars..
Proof

{This was so very fun..your a great writer, Jedi..Thanx a million!}

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On Sunday November 20th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:

i've posted this piece on PoeticMic.com. your name is all over it along with mine...hope you don't mind.

On Thursday September 1st, 2005, abattoir (147) writes:

both minds collide beautifully. what a tease you were.sexy write

On Friday March 4th, 2005, Loneal (118) writes:

Haha! As much fun as Jedi had creating that, I had possibly as much fun reading it! Great read and thanx! ~L (Synthetic Darkness)

On Friday May 7th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

though these are not my type of poems, I find it really neat that two darkpoets can create interesting and captivating works of art. Yay!

On Thursday May 6th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

ooohhh yeahhhhhh... great write, cool meter...thoroughly enjoyed this one.

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:

This slides so silkily past the tongue...wow. Gotta love this. Great job, you two.

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (318) writes:

velvet...you'll never believe how much smoke emitted from my ears as i attempted to keep up with you...i enjoyed this as well...you're an awesome writer. much love. ///Jedi\\\

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, capt_funguy (993) writes:

very smooth .. understated eloquence ,,,, dig it ... funguy

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

Those opening lines were perfect. I enjoyed this one as well. GREAT work, you guyzzzzzzz. Much love.

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Lydia Jade (790) writes:

fucking awsome....i love this one....your works flow together as if from one mind....im so amazed at the greatness of it...

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