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Just Now..Like This...

It's hard to feel
just now..like this
thoughts scatter
dreams shatter
you..flatter
as my breath quickens..

I protest
you steal a kiss
never miss
beckon a hisssssss
this iron fist
flattens your heart

Now I hate
beckoned fate
sweet distaste
radiates
permiate to satiate
how my hunger swells

Soon this rush
calls a blush
libido's flush
ride a hush
lips to crush
dancing in your lust

Do I dare
pull your hair
bodies ...bare
passion's flare
this...so...rare
take me now like this..

Soon to neglect
as we connect
desires...defect
intentions...inspect
lack of respect
just a passing whim?

Hips roll and burn
taking turns
savage yearn
lessons to learn
another
...return

Just now...
......Like This..

Take me...

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On Thursday April 29th, 2004, evolve (2293) writes:

The raw search of passion in one another...summed up perfectly.

On Friday April 9th, 2004, urbanhumility (1366) writes:

beautiful, your essence of passion and learned prose do you so well here......so very well done.......urban

On Tuesday April 6th, 2004, flying_fox (769) writes:

pure seduction as always...*takes this to bed*. Fox

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:

_oh,Vel...what a lovely flow...the passion that goes into each of your works...astounding.good stuff.-that guy who used to fry vampires:)

On Sunday April 4th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

I like the push/pull affect of this. Of course, your writing I love... though the feeling here conveyed.. I despise. :::OLd

On Sunday March 28th, 2004, Markus Porkwing (713) writes:

*jumps you* ok if you say so.

On Friday March 26th, 2004, Alanarchy (1681) writes:

"I protest you steal a kiss" This was great vel. It's been WAY to long.

On Monday April 5th, 2004, Anth (1613) writes:

brilliant, love the way you write, the hiss line was cool, in anais nin,s words "i search for the marvellous" and i scroll down the page to find it

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