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Doors- {Satchel full of Malice}

You had me from hello..
Or was it just goodbye
a satchel full of malice
a winter left to die

Clinging to the iceberg
that frosted o'er your heart
hanging from a street sign
no direction left to chart

Whimsical in nature
eden and his rock
callous and abandoned
passion's stoic rot

Welted by a freehand
loving was the verse
stained a faded yellow
amazingly perverse

Chained within your torture
smooth as vicious cream
haunting now my hallways
bound within my dreams

Emptied of tommorrows
fantasies that crash
visions left you seething
That brutal hunger,.. crass

Dip into the cauldron
infernal is its core
save me from your rainbow
close another door..

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On Thursday April 29th, 2004, evolve (2228) writes:

This is such a lovely piece...with a lonely undertone to it.

On Friday March 19th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:

mm...such excellent execution and flow...this is vivid and alluring...I do miss reading your works daily...I must get back into the routine :)

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

Wonderful opening! .. "You had me from hello.." ..and amazing closure.. "save me from your rainbow close another door.." ...every word in between just made a great complement for each other ..I am absolutely in love with this one.

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Lynaes (1129) writes:

Oh wow, so beautiful. With this piece you've created a shockingly vivid picture, with some beautifully executed lines. Holding on to a love even though you know it's gone.. Exquisite. ~L

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Alanarchy (1599) writes:

This whole thing really took a hold on me. I found myself reading aloud and not realizing it. Great job, vel. Wonderfully written.

On Friday March 12th, 2004, Alanarchy (1599) writes:

Yes. beautiful pic.

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_incredible...awesome rhymes throughout made this flow.and what a flow it was...beautiful imagery.quite impressive,Vel.thankyou.-tim

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:

_nice pic,too.;)

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (365) writes:

I adore the third stanza...and the rest of it is spectacular as well. +T.P.U+

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, sulkylime (258) writes:

the first line had me thinking of jerry maguire ..sorry couldn't help it hehe -- nice flow to it all, good write

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