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Tainted angel
wings of dust
thy halo twined
in harrowed trust

roughly tattered
soiled and torn
a barren heart
bleeding scorn

once that face
staggered royals
blessed beauty
robbed of morals..

second nature
bred of trust
through the flesh
thy posion thrusts


Broken wings
barely flutter
towing you out
of your gutters

placing you back
on the cross
helping you feel
all you've lost

twinkling spheres
once called stars
now replacing
iron bars..


genocide ...
perfumes your pulse
chloraform chokes
disguised as rust


casting you out
of your stained life
dull edges do gleam
consider the knife


absent veins
hued of malignancy
screaming out
in faux galantry


Dust off your hem
dance weightlessly
rise once more
negotiate fantasy


the past does not stand
stock still and silenced
nor should the present
sit stagnant and chaliced

what of the future..
those golden robes....
open them blindly
draw of some hope

angel I see
tainted and taunted
behind sapphire orbs
a soul sleeping ..haunted

others like you
take pride in the night
rehearsing rejection
cast out from light


rest now and dream
safe in your mind
later we'll walk
your hand in mine

do you beleive in reprieve
in second chances?
where you a good student
learn all of the dances?

sit now and tarry
near to my side
let me now tell you
of this guilt laden tide


You too will see
I am like thee
I've broken my wings
no more to soar free..






it was a great story
one would almost believe
the resemblance .. uncanny
could this angel be me..??















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On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, cherietree (21) writes:
i love all your work its amazing!!!!!


On Monday June 21st, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (229) writes:
*heart fluttering* sehr ist gut.....*faints*


On Friday May 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (37) writes:
sheer perfection!


On Sunday November 30th, 2003, Moodswing (72) writes:
i am running our of ways to say you are awesome...im just gonna start worshipping you....*kneels* ALL HAIL GODDESS VEL!


On Saturday November 29th, 2003, Drea (934) writes:
vel, this is beautiful. the mixture of fantasy with reality and..just... so good.. as always.. ~Drea~


On Thursday November 27th, 2003, Bloody_Hands (29) writes:
Wow, that was amazing! ~Lynne


On Tuesday November 25th, 2003, OLd SouL (837) writes:
I love it Vel... diff from your norm but still full of your essence. Shows how dimensional you are. :::OLd


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Trichotillomaniac (49) writes:
Wow, that was incredible. Another person I must envy on their talent. I usually end up skimming poetry, yours just..grabbed me


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Ophelia (305) writes:
I am speechless, this was beautiful beyond any thing I have read, I shall keep it forever..................O.


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Alanarchy (1600) writes:
Damn great write. I loved it. "You too will see I am like the I've broken my wings no more to soar free" ...Wow. I can realy relate to that.


On Monday November 24th, 2003, WinterGrave (337) writes:
oh wow, dark and a vary nice read.~~~Grave


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:
Well,well I didn't know you could write so darkly like this. heh but what do i know you call me darkling so i guess i know where i stand eh?-Kefka


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Stranger (281) writes:
You are one of the few poets that can blow me away with a rhyming poem. You, like the great Cohen, rhyme as though that is simply the way we are supposed to speak. I really liked the flutter/gutter stanza. I could feel the struggle.


On Monday November 24th, 2003, sole (114) writes:
wow, this poem is just good on so many levels. I especially liked "twinkling spheres once called stars now replacing iron bars.. " Excellent work.


On Monday November 24th, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1825) writes:
*drops on floor* err your good girl damn good... :o) should have been reading your poem ages ago ...



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