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Love me...

Love me a little
I wont ask for much
A bit of your attentions
A remnant of your touch

Love me a little
Come, be my savior
Not an Adonis
More something to savor

Love me a little
My desire to ignite
Feed me a little
remain in my sights

Love me a little
Lap salt from my skin
I'll return the favor
Both sides will win

Love me a little
let me taste of your beast
Give it to me freely
You love me to tease

Love me a little
One who'll cherish your seed
My tongue longs to taste you
A ravaging need

Love me a little
She'll never know
To whom you keep running
Our little show

Love me a little
I promise not to tell
You know I please you, Darling
Our erotic hell..

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On Sunday September 7th, 2008, Lethie (14) writes:

I like it

On Thursday June 2nd, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (83) writes:

captivating and lip licking yummy!! I bow down :) :)

On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, Serenity (578) writes:

Very interesting and just too awesome. Great write :)

On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1221) writes:

interesting piece...i really like it.

On Monday March 21st, 2005, BleedSilver (372) writes:

Very moving and inspiring. This piece has a lot of power...

On Friday July 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (8) writes:

this really moved the jesus out of me. i really like this a lot.

On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, An Expired Member (2) writes:

Im pretty new to the site so, your probably used to getting comments like wow and jesus that was great so Im going to try and be unique by just saying Thanks for this one

On Wednesday June 30th, 2004, OLd SouL (833) writes:

unique? errm.. not really. but a very nice gesture :P Vel, you little sinner. Lovely as always, hun. :::OLd

On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

yummy write. sensual in a sort of way. cool. -MeL-

On Wednesday April 28th, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (43) writes:

Delicous art!

On Thursday March 11th, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Sexy...I love this piece. I must say my favorite line is "You know I please you, Darling" It gives a little attitude that finishes off the piece nicely. Well done. ~Faerie~

On Thursday October 23rd, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (763) writes:

Mmm...erotic hell. Save me a seat...I wouldn't want to miss out on that. Beautifully written.

On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

This is absolutely my favorite poem on DarkPoetry.

On Wednesday October 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (21) writes:

just yummy, I want that hell.

On Tuesday October 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

You are my poetry Goddess! May I call you my poetry Goddess or Mistress... either would work!!?? Your works are SO good! *bows and scampers away*

On Monday August 25th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

I like this peice, it's sadistic yet very erotic, the best pleasures in life come in making love. You have a great definitive sence on this subject ;)

On Monday August 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (22) writes:

this was breathtaking i loved it. well written, as always.

On Sunday July 27th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

Very erotic and naughty at the same time. I love this one. Sooo dastardly done!

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

Oh this is perfect, I love how you slyly introduce it as an affair. Great job love.

On Friday July 18th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

Thank you very much...A little deceit never hurt anyone eh?...

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (17) writes:

erotic hell huh? sounds interesting, good, sexy

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

a sweet little, sultrey tease. I love the way you develop it from innocent to something much more.

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, Nadir (615) writes:

Incredible! I love this line.... To whom you keep running. Our little show.... The poem change slowly, then just to end in this great finaly of deception and erotic hell ... Bravo!

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, maddin foxxxy (381) writes:

i can say this one is my absolute favorite 2night!!!....caught me from the beginning and was satisfied till the end...all i've thought about in a an amazing poem...great job!!

On Thursday July 17th, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:

erotic hell, there's a place I'd like to go when I die

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