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Barren in the Womb

Alone...I Float...

...Barren....

In The Womb

I am...

Limbless..
Voiceless...

I Am..

At the mercy of your will..

Can you even feel me?

I am

A Single Cell..

    With a Soul..

Sightless...Primitive.....Dependent

Vulnerable......Invalid.....

   Striving

           Towards...

             - One-

                Thing.........

               ~......Breath.....~

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On Sunday October 7th, 2007, carlosjackal (1724) writes:

The communication of the egg in the womb, if it could be put into words..So much spoken here, brilliant. -Carl

On Sunday July 17th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (312) writes:

lovely indeed. -kitty

On Monday November 15th, 2004, Savannah (285) writes:

awesome.. nuff said

On Monday October 13th, 2003, Silver Spectre (90) writes:

and brings to mind the argument of when life begins.Invalid yet striving to breathe.~Silver~

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

I like reading your works...the spaces add a new dimension for emotion

On Thursday August 7th, 2003, Blood of Winter (367) writes:

An interesting take on conception, I like it, it is humbling when you think we all start out like that.

On Sunday July 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (25) writes:

This reminds me of when I was a child and I wanted to somehow "re-create" the feeling in the womb. I would empty my lungs so I could sink deeper into the pool and then I would close my eyes and curl into a ball.

On Monday July 7th, 2003, manywalks (947) writes:

Quiet and reflective, left me with the feeling of a burgeoning sense chaos. ~ mw

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (708) writes:

Then I was born! Blahhhhh! Boo!

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, pessum ire animus (73) writes:

perplexed.... somehow... this was...is...wonderful....

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

Thanks for your comment. I was actually speaking of the mere moments, just after conception, the cell, that has no idea what it is, or will become..yet somehow it just knows it must do..Yes, I know I'm...odd.grinz*

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (313) writes:

The clarity of this piece offered me much room to think of the details unsaid. The brief conclusion still managed to hold important the meaning of the poem. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:

I actually left so many spaces so the reader could reflect on the unspoken, Im glad you picked it up easily. Thank you for your encouragement.

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, King_Crazy_Dave (407) writes:

in an attempt to leave a deeper comment. it was purposely choppy whch left me with a very psychotic feeling. great job. i plan on reading more

On Sunday July 6th, 2003, Demosthenes (222) writes:

man. dude. cool. -B

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