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Rape Me

Fuck Me
Hard
Deep
Rhythmic

Shackle Me
Bound
Broken
Helpless

Sodomize Me
Painful
Pleasurous
Degrading

Intoxicate Me
Addiction
Poison
Craving

Indulge Me
Slick
Breathless
Orgasmic

Rape Me
Blinded
Feral
Bloodied

-Just Promise Not To Speak-

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On Saturday December 1st, 2007, An Expired Member (46) writes:

like the way you used words and not sentences

On Saturday November 10th, 2007, RubyXero (488) writes:

...always a prequalifier...

On Friday October 19th, 2007, Chunky (60) writes:

*Props*

On Friday October 19th, 2007, me_the_messenger (174) writes:

oo. yeahhh... -fave- *messenger

On Thursday March 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:

i really do like this one, except..i don't get my kicks from getting raped, but otherwise it's all good.

On Monday January 8th, 2007, Freebird (685) writes:

Hot damn. Right on Carlos.

On Sunday November 5th, 2006, carlosjackal (1614) writes:

Such beautiful debauchery. Fuck me raw, fuck me blue, fuck me hard, fuck me true. Write the fuck on..

On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, An Expired Member (20) writes:

i like this one alot. ot speaks about things that people are often afraid to talk about. i love it!!! ~Corpse

On Sunday October 1st, 2006, Bluegirl (255) writes:

This was beautifully done. *fav*

On Saturday March 11th, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:

*clap* that was fucking great

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (284) writes:

that last line is absolutely chilling. ~lauren~

On Saturday February 4th, 2006, MindRape (902) writes:

*grinz* becareful not only what you wish for but...how you wish for it >;) you might find someone that with just fuck your head and heart up and still have a little dick and not good in bed

On Tuesday January 3rd, 2006, dismal silence (20) writes:

oh damn, just awsome, intense, feeling every word of it

On Wednesday December 28th, 2005, Shewolf (40) writes:

I love it,,,chill me, thrill me, fulfill me and then leave me the hell alone.....Shewolf

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, cherietree (21) writes:

i think this is amazing

On Monday October 10th, 2005, An Expired Member (10) writes:

wow thats way deep

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (58) writes:

remindes me

On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

Amazing

On Monday May 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:

dont worry i dont kiss and tell

On Tuesday May 24th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:

"-Just Promise Not To Speak-" ... Amazing. Great peice :)

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (93) writes:

Intense and raw and real. you are incredible!!!!

On Saturday April 9th, 2005, Serenity (603) writes:

Oh I love this!

On Tuesday October 26th, 2004, agentlemenspromise (59) writes:

you make rape sound beautiful

On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (348) writes:

Excellent work. Perfect rhythm and word choice. This is a definite favorite.

On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, An Expired Member (15) writes:

You describe it so wonderfully. I sugest you read my poem breaker of the innocent. it might strike a memory.

On Thursday June 3rd, 2004, WikidGrrl (36) writes:

very good...straight to the point and very clear...i love it!

On Wednesday May 5th, 2004, Mischevious Princess (52) writes:

talk about blunt....and to the point

On Monday March 29th, 2004, gracefullytorn (73) writes:

Honest and raw. Straight to the most prominant feelings of rape. Very provocative. Great piece.

On Saturday March 20th, 2004, Dekika (9) writes:

This is really good, I don't know what else to say.

On Thursday March 4th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (615) writes:

I would have to agree, especvially when they say something the shouldnt have. Great work.

On Monday January 26th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:

well all I can say is...Velvet, you'd change a good hetero girl like myself any day of the week. This is amazing. And, incidentally, am in total agreement with AlluringDecent. Brilliant. When my membership finally comes through this will be a fave for su

On Monday January 26th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:

re. FF

On Friday January 23rd, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

This is sensual and beautiful. I love this. It's nice to see writers who see sex for what it really is, something beautiful, not something to be hushed up and hidden. Great write hun.

On Thursday January 15th, 2004, Tracer (143) writes:

I agree...descriptive, I liked it...I like poetry that isn't the norm...^vTracerv^

On Monday December 22nd, 2003, Delilah (140) writes:

It's like you got into my brain...and found that little bitty corner of it that no one knows about...shhh...don't tell nobody, but mmmm....yup, this was good...~Delilah~

On Thursday December 11th, 2003, Petrified Wood (70) writes:

Painful, yet there is pleasure...**jwd**

On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, Alanarchy (1615) writes:

The few words you used highlighted the end. Dont speak. I promise I wont say a word.

On Monday November 24th, 2003, spaniellie (89) writes:

awsome write, few words but its full of meaning.

On Sunday November 2nd, 2003, An Expired Member (40) writes:

And you live.... where? I'm glad you were on tonight, otherwise I would not have found your work. You are now one of my favs.

On Sunday October 26th, 2003, Loserland (138) writes:

yes the words Kurt should've wrote...what?.. nevermind...(pun intended)...deeply (!) satisfying as always

On Wednesday October 22nd, 2003, An Expired Member (62) writes:

An appalling end. Good Job.

On Saturday October 4th, 2003, An Expired Member (43) writes:

Not really much of a comment,but...wow..(Promise not to speak...great line)Dusky..xxx... (p.s.,i love that poem in ur profile(take this waltz)its beautiful

On Thursday September 25th, 2003, Drea (976) writes:

i agree with everything in this poem and eveything Alluring Descent said..whats with guys wanting to be all soft and delicate.shit just give it to me.. and like you said.. dont speak.. that ruins everything.. i LOVED THIS.. its goin in my favorites..~Drea

On Monday September 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (13) writes:

promise not to speak...what a long way toward hidden emotions... really perfect. ***

On Friday September 5th, 2003, An Expired Member (3) writes:

*blink* Oh. Oh my. *scurries away to do indecent things*

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:

You know what I don't get? Men who think women want it soft all the time. Half the time I don't want any fucking loving words. I want to be thrown against a wall, with my hands pinned down. Stupid fucking soft men. Grr...can you tell I have some pent

On Wednesday August 20th, 2003, AlluringDescent_darkbride (803) writes:

up aggression? lol

On Saturday August 16th, 2003, An Expired Member (2) writes:

I enjoy the tempo, like a hard rape and an even harde orgasm

On Monday September 1st, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

Mmmmmmmm You knowwwwwww what I like!!

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, An Expired Member (51) writes:

Uhmmm hell yeah.........I ....uhmm love this damnit...

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

Let is be known cre thinks rape isn't sexy and she is the spellchecker today! heh Thanks cre.,.you made me smile this morning...and I am very demented...Thanks again

On Monday July 28th, 2003, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Fuck yah...mmmm yah...I have Nirvana stuck in my head though...corruptus

On Sunday July 27th, 2003, Delphoid-Q (284) writes:

O.K. I'll rape you. I'll even do it silently.

On Thursday July 31st, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

ooo a man after my own wicked heart...heh

On Thursday July 24th, 2003, CharlottesWeb (593) writes:

LOL! I was so into this poem. Taking it very serious and loving it...then I got to that end line and I cracked up! This could be taken both in a comical light and a seriously...both moods fit this great. I wonder which one you meant it to be? Hot...nicely

On Saturday September 27th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

seriously...darkling...i want all the painful , pleaserous things done...with NO lip servie attached..*winx* let me enjoy it without ruining it with words..

On Tuesday July 15th, 2003, _Andrew_ (302) writes:

aight, all i can say in that friken intense, nice shitz :D, and the last line of the poem... pure friken genious good stuff :D *~*aNDReW*~*

On Friday July 18th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

So much can be heard, if we just learn to be silent..

On Sunday August 10th, 2003, The Fallen Angel (289) writes:

I agree that in silence much can be heard even the things we don't want to hear

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, Bakkhus Unbound (1119) writes:

"Hard Deep Rhythmic" BREATHLESS; absolute, pure, velvet flesh burns in this poem. It hurts; it feels good. unbounded & chained. breathless...

On Saturday July 12th, 2003, hate_doll (331) writes:

Ooohm...this is delicious..my desires wrapped into a tight, sexy, nifty little package hee hee...gorgeous bev, just gorgeous...

On Friday July 11th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (725) writes:

OOOh lordy, so yummy!

On Friday July 4th, 2003, gspot (48) writes:

YOu have found the wrong mouths. The best continue to speak of the wicked pleasures to come, or how much they enjoy taking you. Or they make you beg for what you are supposedly do not want.

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, SeekingNirvana (34) writes:

i agree with fireinmyeyes. but it's not rape if you want it ^_^ -Sephiroth

On Friday July 4th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

Its rape to me If you take it!!

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:

Maybe it is if you want it but don't know when it's coming.... though... ah fuck it you're right Sephiroth

On Saturday July 5th, 2003, SeekingNirvana (34) writes:

hahaha :)

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (83) writes:

Nirvana

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Need you, Dream you, Find you, Taste you, Fuck you, Use you, Scar you, Break you. Lose me, Hate me, Smash me, Erase me. Kill Me, kILL, mE, kill me, KILL ME, kill ME, KILL me, KiLl Me, kIlL mE, KilL me, kILl ME, KIll Me, kiLL mE.

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

My response to a kick ass poem. Anyways, you put your icq thing on the memberboard. i kinda added it to my contact thing. It'd be cool to talk to another disturbed poet.

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, manywalks (972) writes:

Reminds me of my Do Me piece, but so much better pharsed. ~ mw

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, Bast (1007) writes:

yes! oh god yes... mmm... the fucking MEMORIES... and so many more to make. ::grins::

On Thursday July 3rd, 2003, An Expired Member (15) writes:

Promise not to speak, i love that line, i wish i could say that to my girl half the time,,, provacative write, i loved it

On Friday July 4th, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (532) writes:

Everything is great, until they open their fucking mouths? Why ruin it?..

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